Makayla’s review shop (I’m reviewing people stories)


~I’m giving honest feedback/so don’t feel hurt about my opinion
~I will send you screenshots
~Just wait/be patient

*send your stories :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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I would love that :smiley: I just need to have chapter 3 done… but then get yourself ready please :laughing: (my directing is very original :+1: )

- this is game over :sunglasses: (I’m not very advanced sooo…)

Thank you for thisss! My story hasn’t been published yet!

  • TITLE: Compulsion
  • AUTHOR: Aimee. A
  • GENRE: Romance, comedy and action!
  • CHAPTERS PUBLISHED: Please could you only read 2 chapters, I haven’t finished episode 3 yet!
  • DESCRIPTION: Zyro Morte is sent on death row. He’s given the chance to extend his time after the FBI need him for a mission. Simple? One problem, he has to jeopardize his soulmates family!?
  • COVER: (Not done yet!)
  • LINK:

Password: RULES
Thanks again! :hearts::hearts

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Genre: Mystery (LGBT)

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Growing Pains, by Jaz

hi! i’d love a review!


Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 4 (More to come)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Shortened Link:

Can you send your thoughts in a message?
If so here is mine. :blue_heart:
Alone Till There was You
There is 9 episodes out


Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Liyah
Genre: Drama
Episodes: (4-more coming soon)
**Description:**alana. a party girl, trying to navigate her way through life.
follow alana and her best friends through this crazy journey.
cc, scandal, desire and choices!

(Password: RULES)

(Don’t get offended it’s my opinion)

Plot 6.5/10 -I liked the story line,but it was a little basic.

Directing/grammar 10/10 -The directing was really good I will continue to read this story.

~I really liked the background music and the edits.

~This story is good and I hope you finish the story :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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thank you.
It is a little basic and I was trying to avoid that.
I’m kinda thinking about revamping it a little.
but thank you! :slight_smile:
I was feeling self conscious on it but I am definitely going to continue.

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Feel free to check out mine. It could have been an entry for the Adventurous contest though… :sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::sob::scream:

My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6


Hey! It would make me really happy if you’d want to review mine :orange_heart:

Title: Rich Girls Cry Too
Author: Ava Josefine
Genre: Drama
Plot/Summary: Vera’s dream of becoming a famous musician feels closer than ever when a new, big TV-show about her school is being made. But things don’t turn out the way she expects them to.
Style: Limelight



(Do not get offended it’s my opinion)

Plot 10/10:the story is so good I’m on episode 3…I hope you continue!

Directing/grammar:Your’re grammer is good.The directing was fine.

~I liked the story I will be keep reading it

Aw, thank you so much! I really appreciate it! Thanks for taking the time to read it :cherry_blossom:

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