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That’s what your here for right??
Judging you on things like
-grammar
-coding
-plot
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I’d love a review! Thanks for creating this thread! Here’s my story: Name: Girl of Deception Author: IDONTKNOW Number of episodes: 8 (reading the first chapter is fine though) Description: Aria Lamar has is all. She’s rich, beautiful and smart. But she’s a selfish arrogant jerk. Little does she know that’s all about to change.CC in episode 6 choices matter Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5855942598328320
Grammar (10/10)
All your grammar was good…So I can’t say much there
Coding (10/10)
You had a lot of choices which is nice and I really enjoy the plot twist at the end
Plot (9/10)
The plot is really good and unique I’m confused on Aria age because in real life theirs nobody in that business that young unless they were a you-tuber. And usually in episode stories they go to the bar/club to drink and She can’t do that. So my advice in the future is to make a realistic ages.
Grammar (10/10)
I really enjoyed the song in the shower (Love that song)
Coding (12/10)
You did a really nice job with the coding and all the overlays but customizable characters would be nice…And you had a good amount of choices
Plot (9/10)
I love fantasy stories…And I think I know what your going for but…I’m a little slow and a little confused on the Magic lady…Because I’m not sure if other characters can see her…
But overall I liked you story a lot and I’m definitely gonna read a few more episodes
Coding (7/10)
You did mess up a little on facing characters…I personally would not read your story because characters looks…So if I was you I would definitely add customizable characters and more outfit outfit choices
Plot (10/10)
I think you have very interesting plot I never read a LGBT story so for my first time…I actually love I felt really bad for the main character that has to go through that…I with you can take the story very far…because it is a really good idea for a story…and I know lots of people that go through this…But again making them customizble will bring in a lot more reads
Title: Fantastical- The Mermaid
Author: Rahdia
IG: th3punkprincess08.episodeart
Episodes 6up
Genre: fantasy
Plot: A chef seeking new ways to improve his cooking accidentally falls in the forbidden waters of Gaya where he meets the guardian of the sea: A mermaid
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6670380075057152
P.s. Thank you for creating this thread!
Title: Kotton Kandie
Author: Pretty Eri
Description: Kandie’s finally free from an abusive marriage. Now it’s time for her to start anew - with a stalkerish ex-husband on her tail. Help her navigate through life. All choices matter.
Episodes: 4 more coming soon
Link: Https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5532581127127040
I hope your okay with me reading two episode…But mama can’t be left on no cliffhanger!!!
Grammar (10/10)
Coding (9/10)
Your coding was good in all…But I do love me some Customizable characters and since you won’t be having that your going to have to put a lot more choices but I think the main character’s looks matches there personality
Plot (20/10)
I am in love with the plot in the first two episodes so your doing something right .And me being a
African American mother of 5 I understand what she’s going through…And I think it’s really funny how you put god into it cause that all black mom’s do …
Title: The Kingdoms
Author: Peached pie
Hook: Lauren is heir to the human throne, the weakest of the 7 kingdoms. Will she be able to prove her strength in helping the supernatural realms, or will they all fall?
…Just don’t
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