Mannequin Script Template Errors

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#1

So, in my story I’ve used Joseph Evans’ script template from Episode Life. The mannequin one. I’m writing a limelight story so I had to change a few things around (like the animations). When I was done, I previewed it. It didn’t come up as an error but when I click an outfit it makes the character choose a different one. This is the chunk of the script… Maybe @Dara.Amarie could help?

INT. FASHION BOUTIQUE OL - DAY

@zoom reset

@MANNEQUIN1 spot 0.840 65 210 in zone 2 at layer -2 AND MANNEQUIN1 faces left

@MANNEQUIN2 spot 0.840 164 210 in zone 2 at layer -1 AND MANNEQUIN2 faces left

@MANNEQUIN3 spot 0.840 262 210 in zone 2 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN3 faces left

@MANNEQUIN1 starts talk_handsonhips_neutral

@MANNEQUIN2 starts primp_brushhair_happy

@MANNEQUIN3 starts talk_gossip

@MANNEQUIN4 spot 0.840 65 210 in zone 3 at layer -2 AND MANNEQUIN4 faces left

@MANNEQUIN5 spot 0.840 164 210 in zone 3 at layer -1 AND MANNEQUIN5 faces left

@MANNEQUIN6 spot 0.840 262 210 in zone 3 at layer 0 AND MANNEQUIN6 faces left

@MANNEQUIN4 starts talk_clutchchest_sad_loop

@MANNEQUIN5 starts think_rubchin

@MANNEQUIN6 starts talk_exclaim_yes_happy

@MANI enters from left to upscreen left

@pause for a beat

@ISABELLE enters from left to screen left

@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 2

@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 3

@pause for a beat

@cut to zone 1

    MANI (talk_reassure_neutral)
Which one do you like the best?

    ISABELLE (think_rubchin)
(Hmm...)
(Let's take a closer look.)

@pan to zone 2

@zoom on 320 270 to 231% in 3

label MANNEQUIN1_default

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 490 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto MANNEQUIN2_default

}
“Choose This One!”{

    NARRATOR (ISABELLE)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label MANNEQUIN2_default

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 640 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto MANNEQUIN3_default

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 320 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto MANNEQUIN1_default

}
“Choose This One”{

    NARRATOR (ISABELLE)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label MANNEQUIN3_default

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@pan to zone 3 in 0.5

goto MANNEQUIN4_default

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 490 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto MANNEQUIN2_default

}
“Choose this one!”{

    NARRATOR (ISABELLE)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label MANNEQUIN4_default

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 800 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto MANNEQUIN5_default

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@pan to zone 2 in 0.5

goto MANNEQUIN3_default

}
“Choose This one”{

    NARRATOR (ISABELLE)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label MANNEQUIN5_default

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“Next outfit -->”{

@zoom on 960 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto MANNEQUIN6_default

}
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 640 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto MANNEQUIN4_default

}
“Choose This One!”{

    NARRATOR (ISABELLE)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label MANNEQUIN6_default

@pause for a beat

    NARRATOR
This one?

choice (outfit)
“<-- Previous outfit”{

@zoom on 800 270 to 231% in 0.5

goto MANNEQUIN5_default

}
“Choose This One!”{

    NARRATOR (ISABELLE)
This is my favourite.

goto chose_dress

}

label chose_dress

@cut to zone 1

@zoom reset

    MANI (talk_shrug_neutral)
Are you sure?

    ISABELLE
...

choice
“Yep, I’m sure”{

    ISABELLE (talk_excited_happy)
Yep, I'm sure.

}
“Let me take another look”{

    ISABELLE (talk_think_neutral)
Let me take another look.

@pan to zone 2

@zoom on 320 270 to 231% in 3

goto MANNEQUIN1_default

}

    ISABELLE (talk_excited_happy)
I'm gonna get changed into it right now.

@ISABELLE exits right

@transition fade out black 1

INT. BLACK - NIGHT

@pause for a beat

INT. FASHION BOUTIQUE OL - DAY

@MANI stands upscreen left in zone 1 AND MANI faces right

@transition fade in black 1

@ISABELLE stands screen center in zone 2

if (outfit is “Choose MANNEQUIN1_default”){

@ISABELLE changes into MANNEQUIN1_default

}elif (outfit is “Choose MANNEQUIN2_default”){

@ISABELLE changes into MANNEQUIN2_default

}elif (outfit is “ChooseMANNEQUIN3_default”){

@ISABELLE changes into MANNEQUIN3_default

}elif (outfit is “Choose MANNEQUIN4_default”){

@ISABELLE changes into MANNEQUIN4_default

}elif (outfit is “Choose MANNEQUIN5_default”){

@ISABELLE changes into MANNEQUIN5_default

}else{

@ISABELLE changes into MANNEQUIN6_default

}

@ISABELLE enters from right to screen right

@ISABELLE is dance_grind_neutral_loop

Please help ASAP!


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#2

Did you reset your story progress?


#3

ye i tried everything


#4

Oh, yeah. It’s not working because you need to use choice name inside if/elif

}
“Choose This One!”{ <--------- this should be inside

NARRATOR (ISABELLE)

This is my favourite.
goto chose_dress

}

You have “Choose This One!” in every option so it won’t work. Change it to "Choose outfit 1"

and then change it in your if/elif/else

if (outfit is “Choose outfit 1”){

@ISABELLE changes into MANNEQUIN1_default
}

an so on.


#5

@Apes

Ohhhh, thanks so much :slight_smile: