I’m not sure if I’m sharing this correctly so please direct if I’m not.
Thank you in advance for any feedback. 
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You did a good job but you can send the link of the story
Is this what you need?
Whoops, I pasted the link in this but it didn’t appear when I replied.
This is so weird. I shared it on facebook and my daughter was able to play it. How do I properly post it here?
Hello, The story was very nice for a first time writer but, you need to fix some on the spot directing and also when you doing a flash back show a little story not just words, and if you need any help just reply i can help you write the story.
Thank you for your feedback!
Go to manage stories on the writers portal and then click on the link and highlight it then copy and paste it on here
Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ?
But first : For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form
Link below :
Here is the description of my story :
Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy
Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 12 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736
r4r?
Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description:
Vampires, werewolves, and hybrids – who will you side with? Hey, Hybrid Queen, hurry up. War is on its way.
Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music
Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization
Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror
Style: Limelight
Link:
Instagram: gisellepisode 
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