Many A Moon - First time Writer - I don't have 3 episodes yet, just one but would love any feedback

I’m not sure if I’m sharing this correctly so please direct if I’m not.

Thank you in advance for any feedback. :slight_smile:

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You did a good job but you can send the link of the story

Is this what you need?

Whoops, I pasted the link in this but it didn’t appear when I replied.

Kinda of but when I play it comes with

This is so weird. I shared it on facebook and my daughter was able to play it. How do I properly post it here?

Hello, The story was very nice for a first time writer but, you need to fix some on the spot directing and also when you doing a flash back show a little story not just words, and if you need any help just reply i can help you write the story.

Thank you for your feedback!

Go to manage stories on the writers portal and then click on the link and highlight it then copy and paste it on here

Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first : For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 12 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link :



Name: The Ember Moon Pack


Vampires, werewolves, and hybrids – who will you side with? Hey, Hybrid Queen, hurry up. War is on its way.

Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight


Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:


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