Many A Moon - First time Writer - I don't have 3 episodes yet, just one but would love any feedback


#1

I’m not sure if I’m sharing this correctly so please direct if I’m not.

Thank you in advance for any feedback. :slight_smile:


#2

You did a good job but you can send the link of the story


#3

Is this what you need?


#4

Whoops, I pasted the link in this but it didn’t appear when I replied.


#5

Kinda of but when I play it comes with


#6

This is so weird. I shared it on facebook and my daughter was able to play it. How do I properly post it here?


#7

Hello, The story was very nice for a first time writer but, you need to fix some on the spot directing and also when you doing a flash back show a little story not just words, and if you need any help just reply i can help you write the story.


#8

Thank you for your feedback!


#9

Go to manage stories on the writers portal and then click on the link and highlight it then copy and paste it on here


#10

Hello, we could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first : For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 12 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4807228412788736

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#11

r4r?

Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Vampires, werewolves, and hybrids – who will you side with? Hey, Hybrid Queen, hurry up. War is on its way.

Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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