Welcome to Mashia & Cat’s Review Thread!
Just one different thing here is that @Mashia will be doing written reviews with details and @LukeDaCat will screen record the story and review it audibly in a video (video reviews) which he will send here through YouTube videos.
Here are the details that will be assessed in the written and video reviews.
How We Review || Details
|| FIRST IMPRESSIONS ||
First impressions are what I think of when I first see your story and the introduction.
~ Description, cover art, title, accessibility and introduction.
|| DIRECTING ||
Directing is a rather large section so I will break it down into parts.
~ Dialogue and animations
~ Camera Movements (Zooms, pans, transitions, filters etc.)
~ Overlays, layering etc.
|| GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION ||
Grammar and punctuation is simply if your English was written neatly as well as other tidbits.
~ Basic grammar, English, wording, punctuation.
|| VISUALS AND SOUNDS ||
Visuals and sounds are mainly in the section of aesthetics and suitability.
~ Backgrounds, splashes, overlays, sounds, music, cover art.
|| PLOT ||
The plot is the flow of the story, the pacing, individual chapters, characters, cliches etc.
|| ERRORS ||
This will just go over some of the bigger errors in your story as well as anything else that I might find important. It may include grammar, directing among other things.
|| OVERALL THOUGHTS + TIPS TO IMPROVE ||
My thoughts on the story summed up in a paragraph as well as a straight forward statement about which things you can improve on.
The descriptions of each category may vary from story to story and we might also add some more things to the actual review. The video review and the written response may vary in length.
And here is the form for you to fill out
Form || Fill this out correctly!
Title of your Story:
Genre (Romance, Thriller, Fantasy etc.):
Description (Story Summary):
Cover (Both Covers Preferred):
Style (Classic, Ink or Limelight):
Link To Story:
Review Type/Reviewer (Written or Video, Luke or Mashia):
DISCLAIMER: Please keep in mind that we are NOT professionals. Some reviews may be harsh but please do not take it personally. You are free to use the feedback you interpret through our interviews; it is your story after all.
And finally, here is the waiting list!
Waiting List || Pending Reviews
Save Me, Hero! by @Turtle_Cat ~ Accepted! (Written Review by Mashia)
Hale Huna by @AnonymousAuthor1 ~ Accepted! (Written Review by Mashia)
Thriller: Tribe of Malapinchi by @JannahJackson ~ Accepted! (Written Review by Mashia)
Dreams and Nightmares by @RainbowCat ~ Accepted! (Video Review by Luke)
MICROCIDE by @AS007 ~ Accepted! (Video Review by Luke)
XENA PIERCE by @sophiesophilatte_104 ~ Accepted! (Video Review by Luke)
Teacher or Queen by @mystique_writer ~ Accepted! (Written Review by Mashia)
The Four Horsemen by @S_Unique ~ Accepted! (Written Review by Mashia)
Flight of Passion by @Jadlyss ~ Accepted! (Video Review by Luke)
-Aching for the Bad Girl by @Olivia2003 ~ Accepted! (Written Review by Mashia)
Luke & Mashia