~ Mashia's Review Thread ~

Welcome to Mashia's Review Thread! ^_^

I’m up for reviewing anyone’s stories if you want some feedback!


There are 2 types of reviews I can provide you with; review or feedback.
In reviews, I go through the good things and bad things while in feedbacks, I directly tell you what to improve in each aspect. For examples of my reviews, you can click here to see a partner thread with some completed reviews ;D

How I Structure Reviews:

|| FIRST IMPRESSIONS ||
First impressions are what I think of when I first see your story and the introduction.
~ Description, cover art, title, accessibility and introduction.

|| DIRECTING ||
Directing is a rather large section so I will break it down into parts.
~ Choices
~ Dialogue and animations
~ Camera Movements (Zooms, pans, transitions, filters etc.)
~ Overlays, layering etc.

|| GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION ||
Grammar and punctuation is simply if your English was written neatly as well as other tidbits.
~ Basic grammar, English, wording, punctuation.

|| VISUALS AND SOUNDS ||
Visuals and sounds are mainly in the section of aesthetics and suitability.
~ Backgrounds, splashes, overlays, sounds, music, cover art.

|| PLOT ||
The plot is the flow of the story, the pacing, individual chapters, characters, cliches etc.

|| ERRORS ||
This will just go over some of the bigger errors in your story as well as anything else that I might find important. It may include grammar, directing among other things.

|| OVERALL THOUGHTS + TIPS TO IMPROVE ||
My thoughts on the story summed up in a paragraph as well as a straight forward statement about which things you can improve on.

How I Structure Feedbacks:

|| FIRST IMPRESSIONS ||
Improvement for title, covers, blurb etc.

|| DIRECTING ||
Improvement for choices, dialogue/animations, camera use, overlays etc.

|| GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION ||
Improvement for grammar, punctuation, wording, formality etc.

|| VISUALS AND SOUNDS ||
Improvement on aesthetics, backgrounds/splashes, overlays, use of sound, cover art etc.

|| PLOT ||
Improvement on flow of story, pacing, characters etc.

|| ERRORS ||
Large errors to fix/grammatical mistakes.

|| OVERALL THOUGHTS + TIPS TO IMPROVE ||
Thoughts summed up together and areas to improve in altogether.


Here is the form to fill out!

Form!

Review or Feedback?:
Story Title:
Author Name:
Genre (Romance, Thriller, Fantasy etc.):
Story Summary:
Cover (Both Covers Preferred):
Style (Classic, Ink or Limelight):
Link To Story:
Extra Notes:

NOTE: I cannot guarantee a quick service due to my personal life which may interfere with the time it takes to complete the review.


Waiting List:

  1. Retrace by @line123462

  2. Scars by @xinxmyxeye

  3. Compulsion by @Aims1141

  4. i-Robin by @DanDuck

  5. The Star Necklace by @Maya6

  6. Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane by @Marshmallow_O

  7. Before the Storm by @BadApple

  8. Pennies for my Heart by @Jupiter.episode

  9. It Was Written In The Stars by @MarsX

  10. Black Hearts Golden Desires by @Madhu

  11. Faultless by @writeslondon

  12. Break Away by @Geegtfo

  13. Chaos by @RJGSB

  14. Monster in Me by @Episode.Cameronwrite

  15. Gone by @Episode.Cameronwrite

  16. Without A Trace by @Episode.Cameronwrite

  17. Under the Mask by @sofia.sigma

  18. Uniformed Saviour by @mollie.stories

  19. Timbre of Love by @Captain_vanilla

  20. Beyond Repair by @Geegtfo

  21. LOVE: Mission (Im)possible by @Nadi_Episode

  22. Where the Shadows Belong by @daniepisodewriter


Thanks for taking a look! :sparkling_heart::star_struck:

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Review or Feedback?: can I have a rewiew
Story Title: Retrace
Author Name: Line123462
Genre (Romance, Thriller, Fantasy etc.): mystery
Story Summary: two stories in one. the girl whose mom is in a coma trying to find her dad. the other about the mother when she was young and an undercover cop and dating a criminal
Cover (Both Covers Preferred):
Style (Classic, Ink or Limelight): ink
Link To Story:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6425193401417728
Extra Notes: It’s a cliche story. I did not really wanna published it but then I ended up having the entire plot written finish and thought well I am not losing anything by doing it. and I had nothing else to publish

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Accepted! :blob_hearts:

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I was about to post untiil I remembered you reviewed mine and also made my cover :smiley:

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:joy: :sparkling_heart:

Review or Feedback?: Review

Story Title: Scars

Author Name: inxmyxeyes

Genre (Romance, Thriller, Fantasy, etc.): Action

Story Summary: The past created who Eve is right now. Life never goes easy on her. That’s why she became so ruthless to everyone she’s ever met.

Cover (Both Covers Preferred):

Small Cover

The large cover

Style (Classic, Ink or Limelight): LL

Link To Story: CLICK HERE

Extra Notes: English is not my native language, so let me know about all the mistakes you can find there! Also, what do you think about the plot, how can I improve it? Is it boring?

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Thanks so much! :hearts:

Review or Feedback?: Review, please!
Story Title: Compulsion
Author Name: Aimee.A
Genre (Romance, Thriller, Fantasy etc.): Comedy!
Story Summary: Zyro Morte is sent on death row. He’s given the chance to extend his time after the FBI need him for a mission. Simple? One problem, he has to jeopardize his soulmates family!?
Cover (Both Covers Preferred): They’re not made yet!
Style (Classic, Ink or Limelight): INK!
Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6725446713540608
Extra Notes: I’ve just finally completed all three episodes without publishing yet and would like to know what I could change! I fear that it might be boring.

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@xinxmyxeye ~ Accepted! I’ll try to answer all your questions in the review ;D

@Aims1141 ~ Accepted! :sparkling_heart:

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Thanks so much again! :hearts:

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Review or Feedback?: Review please!
Story Title: i-Robin
Author Name: DanDuck
Genre (Romance, Thriller, Fantasy etc.): Adventure
Story Summary: In 2081, where technology advances, what challenges will Robin, a female droid, face along with all the dramas?
Cover (Both Covers Preferred): They’re approved but I’m not too sure if you can see them without me publishing the story yet.
Style (Classic, Ink or Limelight): Mostly Spotlight, partly Limelight
Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4898915318562816
Extra Notes: I haven’t published my story but I’m currently working on Episode 4. I wanted to test my luck and see if my story really hooks people up! Haven’t seen this genre around (usually people either go Limelight or Spotlight) in Episode, hopefully you’ll give it a read and ultimately enjoying it. Thank you!

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Sounds cool, accepted! :blob_hearts:

I want a feedback

Review or feedback: feedback

Story title : The Star Necklace

Author: Mayah

Summary: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6248660515487744

Genere: Drama

Style : ink

Cover :

Extra notes: N/A

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Review or Feedback?: Review
Story Title: Clue: Before The Storm
Author Name: Bad Apple
Genre (Romance, Thriller, Fantasy etc.): Mystery (although the it won’t be as evident in the beginning)
Story Summary: A repressed, rich girl, finds an escape from her life, in a bar, where a complete strangers shatters her world and initiates a chain of mysteries. She embarks on an investigation which plants her amidst the biggest mafia war yet.
Cover (Both Covers Preferred):


Style (Classic, Ink or Limelight): LL
Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6154775515430912
Extra Notes: Is it possible to have the review DMed to me?

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Can I have a review/feedback for my story please!

Story: Pennies for my heart
Author: Jupiter
Genre: Romance, Drama
Style: Limelight
Description: Charlie sacrifices her teenage years to care for her dying mother and keeps their lives from falling apart. Yet she finds out the hard way that there are things money can’t buy - like silence. A pampered, rich boy finds out her secret. Will he keep it or will he expose her?
Instagram: Jupiter.episode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6447603656491008

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Review or Feedback?: review please! :slight_smile:

Story Title: It Was Written In The Stars
Author Name: Mars X.

Genre (Romance, Thriller, Fantasy etc.): Romance with a dash of comedy

Story Summary: Leonardo is an eccentric model and astrologer. Darryl is an impoverished street thief. Can they win each other’s hearts? Or are they too different?

Covers

Style (Classic, Ink or Limelight): Limelight

Link To Story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6716925350838272

Extra Notes: If you notice any plot holes or things that dont add up, please let me know! i am bad at catching those lol. also inform me if my story is moving at too slow of a pace, too fast, or just right in your opinion. thank you!

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@Maya6 ~ Accepted! :blob_hearts:

@Marshmallow_O ~ Accepted! (Also, happy forums anniversary!)

@BadApple ~ Accepted! I’ll keep in mind to DM you your review ;D

@Jupiter.episode ~ Accepted! :hearts:

@MarsX ~ Accepted! Ahh, my first LGBTQ+ review :D

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May i get a review for my story? This is my first one and english is not my first language. So I could really use some help. The details are below.

Story details

Author: Madhu
Story Title: Black hearts golden desires
Genre: fanatsy
Description: Nand, a sorcerer princess of solataria, has two beautiful loving sisters, her other two halves.But what happens when it becomes the vice versa and an old enemy from their past comes back for revenge? Will Nand overcome it? or will she fail??
Chapter: 6 (more coming up soon) (Currently being revamped, so i think it would be best, if you could just msg me before reviewing my story so I could say the status of my story.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5019562149478400
Instagram: @episode.angelindisguise

cover

Cover:

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Accepted! I’ll make sure I message you before reviewing the story :wink:

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Thank you. :blush:

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Review
Story Title: Faultless

Author: London

Genre: Drama

Style: Limelight

Description: City Wright is a privilege girl attending Diamond Heights University, one of the most prestigious schools in Chicago. What happens when she gets an offer she cant refuse?

Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5359337338109952

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