May someone read + feedback my first story? - "Love: Mission (im)possible?" (NEWBIE)

Hey there :raising_hand_woman:

My name is Nadi and I love Episode! I am reading stories here since…felt like ever. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

But referring to story writing I am totally a Newbie! :slight_smile:

I just released the first three episodes of my first story:

"Love: Mission (im)possible?"

I would be really grateful if you could read the story and give me some feedback.
Just because I like the story does not mean anyone else does. :smiley:

You can find my story:

Love: Mission (im)possible?

Thank you in advance for your time and help!

Friendly greetings from a Newbie