Welcome to MC’s Shop!
If you have any new stories that you need critique in, or if you need some feedback, you came to the right place!
Why choose me to review your story?
I’ll give my most blunt and straightforward feedback to you in order to help you improve. I promise there’ll be no sugarcoating. Be warned, I have high standards for what is a good story. If you’re sensitive to such comments please stay away for the good of both of us, thank you.
How do I review your story?
Unlike others who are giving out scores, I’ll be giving you detailed paragraphs in what I feel and what can be improved on and any areas that you did well. I feel like scores do not justify a story (that’s my opinion, you’re entitled to yours), hence I’ll not be giving any. I’ll read your first chapter and if I like it, I’ll continue. For those who send me beta links I’ll read 2 chapters at least, and if I like it I’ll continue.
Am I eligible for this request?
Anyone who has a story of at least 2 chapters can request. Any stories are okay, other than horror(because I’m scared so don’t come after me). You don’t have to do anything in return.
Who is not eligible for this request?
Those who already requested a review will not be able to request until it is 14 days ago. Note that requesting to review the same story is okay when the last request is at least 14 days old and you’ve made some major improvements to your story. Anyone who disrespects on this thread will be reported and ignored, and I will not take any request from you.
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SLOTS TAKEN: 9/20
Please note I’ll only start the review from 14 December as I am still occupied with life commitments. I will be collecting requests first.
Title: From Riches to Rags
Author: ErinH
Description: Secrets, an arranged marriage, and a death sentence result in Elizabeth running from a kingdom fraught with war while a mysterious pirate repeatedly crosses her path.
Genre: Adventure
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Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense) Title: Save Me, Hero! Author: Turtle Cat! Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do? Style: Ink
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Story name: Living Together Genre: Drama Description : Your past experiences with boys has turned you into a misandry. But there’s 3 boys falling head over heels for you. Will you have a change of heart or end up alone. Choice is yours. CC Link: episodeinteractive.com
Story Title: XENA PIERCE
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An HEIRESS, a DAUGHTER, a GIRL who seeks answers–guide XENA KATSUMI PIERCE as she fights in order to save her mother. Will she make it through? Her SURVIVAL depends on YOU. (CM)
Title: Capture the Moment Description: Takoda is a photographer who inspires to become freelance and expand his portfolio. Can he snapshot his way to success? Genre: Comedy Cover:
Hey there. Always happy to read suggestions and opinions about my stories. Story title: Pine Hollow: Hex of the Three
Story author: Elzbiet Zaleski
Genre: Fantasy
Sub-genres: Mystery, Romance
Description: As Katarina and her family move to the town of Pine Hollow, they find themselves intertwined in a world of supernatural forces; what secrets will rise to the surface?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6695074211627008
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Hope you enjoy.
