🍵 Merlin's story review and proofreading for all stories [CLOSED]

Yes, the Shado :smiley: I remember it from the Interview.

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Thanks for your feedback!
I’m surprised to hear the episode was too long, I’ve never gotten that before — did you time it, by any chance?

No I didn’t but it sure did take longer than usual.

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That’s a shame, I hope it didn’t detract from the rest of the story too much. Because I don’t know what I could take out that isn’t necessary to the story.

Thanks for reading it! I hope you continue :slight_smile:

I’ve been in a similar situation when nobody told me it’a too long until one of my friends pointed it out. I was shocked. I measured it and it really was more than 20 min. Most of the readers wanna spend averige 10-15 on one chapter. It’s only the matter of a few minutes but i’m not gonna argue with the readers :joy: i do what ever they want. Cause they are the ones who read it.
So i cut some things out and moved them to the second chapter :blush: so nothing got lost


I know how you feel! I read through it yesterday and it took me about ten minutes. I’m thinking I might shorten some scenes where possible, because I can’t really remove anything.

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Hey there! I was wondering if you’re still doing reviews? :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Hi there.

I would love a review.


Name - Emerald Falls - The Awakening
Author - Ladyjj
Genre - Drama/Mystery/Thriller
Episodes - 14 (Ongoing)
Description - What awaits in Emerald Falls ??
This is one wild ride, of Twist’s, Turns, and Murder!!
That will test , the strongest and weakest of wills…

Instagram - @ladyjj_episode


[The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Emerald Falls The Awakening(https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5941398553821184 )

:sparkling_heart: :sparkling_heart:

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Hi, I’d love to have a review for 2 of my stories!

Title: Magicka: Fragments of You
Genre: Mystery
IG username: @ js_mits
Episode user: MitsuKi
Having almost no magic is tough to survive. Existing worlds disregarded the prophecy and now that the Realm appeared, everything were once again thrown into chaos. (LL, Full CC)

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5509708903546880

Title: Striving For My Happy Ending
Genre: Fantasy
IG username: @ js_mits
Episode user: MitsuKi
July died suddenly, only to find herself waking up in the world of the ‘Reaching You’ online story! Even worse, as the antagonist who will meet her death! (LL, limited CC)

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5715293131571200

Thank you! :yellow_heart:

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Can you proof read my story? If you’re busy, it’s fine :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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I’m gonna add you to the waiting list :blush:

I’m sorry but the link couldn’t open the story. It just keeps loading and won’t open. I also tried to find the story manually but it wasn’t in the list. The same goes with the user name. It’s like you neighter your story exists :confused::confused:

Hey would you review my story please
Title: H.I.M.
Genre: Drama
Description: You’re meant for the life of crime, gangs, and violence. Eliot, on the other hand, isn’t meant for that type of life. But what happens when you bring HIM into that world? LGBTQ+
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4708880017588224

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Nice story

You have it all.

  • overlays
  • animations
  • coding
  • story line
  • lenght
  • CC
  • funny prison riot (especially the flying chair lol)
  • nice minigame
    And so on. Good job!

I’m gonna make a post on my IG @episode.merlin


Can you give me your episode username? I will give you a follow, then maybe you can access my account and story.

Merlin Romance

Could you please provide me all of the required information? :blush:

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I followed you. I hope you can find me and the story now.

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