Hello! Just wondering, do you offer reviews to unpublished stories? I’ve been looking to get a review for a while now and no news 
Yes, this is called proofreading or beta reading 
I’m happy to offer you my help. You can DM me if you don’t wanna show any details of your story here in the thread.
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Thank you so much! I’ll privately message you my details 
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Hey there! I would love a review!! :DD
Title: Twintastrophe
Author: IzzyTastic
Genre: Drama, romance, fantasy
Description: Remy is the golden boy and Renata doesn’t give 2 craps. Lucky for them, life decides to throw some curveballs. Will everything be okay or will it turn into a Twintastrophe?
Episode user: IzzyTastic
Instagram: @epy.izzytastic
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6579526588104704
Cover: made by the talented @theebee2004 :DD
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Thank you so much!!!
Thank you so much!!! Do you remember any spots where there was awkward entering or leaving the scene? Or sliding in?
Hey! I have a question: I’m currently trying to revamp my story, so is it alright if you review it for me but don’t post it on your instagram (if it’s that good that you want to, which I doubt.)
Omg thank you so much for this review! I will definitely make the changes!!! Very nice suggestions!!! And sorryy my ig is @__queen_episode
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Yes 
Not really but as I read only the first chapter, it was all there. Oh i remember one scene - when the mc was saved by the guy but as there was mainly only his legs, they were sliding around, no walking animation.
This is why it is important to actually read the thread and add all the required information so the review can be sucessful. Unfortunutely I no longer have the screenshots of the story I would’ve post since I did the review days ago. 
Great! here are the details - please be brutally honest! It really helps (take your time! 
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- Story title -The Flame Between Us
- Genre - Drama
- Story description - After being sent to Military School for 3 long years, Ellen begins her senior year at her old school, Maxwell High. What could go wrong when her past comes back to bite her?
- Your Instagram @bmc._.artz
- Your Episode user - Brianna Cavazos
- Story cover -
- Link to your story - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5005532319514624
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- Story title: Melody of Your Heartbeat.
- Genre: Romance.
- Story description: Working as a cashier at a music store wasn’t the moody Ryder’s idea of fun until he meets a beautiful music enthusiast that rocks his world! Romance and drama await! (CC)
- Your Instagram: @medusajett.episode
- Your Episode user: medusa.jett
- Story cover
- Link to your story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5781965477445632
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On the positive side
- cood coding
- overlays
- CC
- lenght
- proper outro
On the down side
Summary
- bg text out of the frame -> i’m a tablet user
- black backgrounds all over -> it’s better to have your signature backgrounds or what ever else intead of the black.
- cc of the li -> don’t start the story saying - this is your li, contumize him -> move the cc of the li to the actual point where the mc meets him -> makes things more natural and starts the fantasy -> you don’t know how your love looks like before meeting them
- i noticed you’re having one and the same bg music through the chapter -> bg music is for giving the right vibes -> different situations have different vibe -> match your music to the scenes
- texting background -> all black again witch is actually not bad but Joseph Evans has a nice phone bg for free at episodelife.com
- weak cliffhanger -> not enough to continue reading
- nothing significant happens at all plus the music makes it have all same vibe from the beginning
Overall the story is just boring and i couldn’t get the point of it at all!
The first chapter is the most important one, you have to maximum impress people with it.
- story description has some important typos. It should be like this-
You are/You’re a rich and famous athlete with a horrible past. He is/Hi’s your new manager. What are you willing to do…
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Real nice one
Good job!
- nice beginning
- advanced coding/directing
- good usage of overlays
- CC
- backgrounds
- lenght
- animations
- theme
- first time i’ve seen anybody ride a tracktor in episode story before
- proper outro
No choices though but I guess that’s alright considering all the rest.
I’ll definitely gonna post your story on my IG @episode.merlin
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Thank you for making this thread 
I just published my first story and I would love to get an honest opinion and review on it
Title : Bullet to the Heart
Author : Eeviee
Genre : Drama/Action
Episodes : 6 (updates weekly)
Description :
Two souls are broken by their hurtful past. They lost trust and beliefs in true love. What will happen if someone were to open up your heart once more, and that person happens to be your target? Will it be mission accomplished or an additional mission to be resolved? [LL, CC, Art Scenes]
Instagram : @eeviee.stories
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5450412600918016
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Thank you for the feedback! I already changed the intro card yesterday and this one fits the screen for both tablets and phones. And already started revamping. Ill be working on making it better and a lot is happening and is going to happen in the next episodes✨
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Hey ya I would like to request a review! Your reviews seem really helpful!
Here’s my story info!
Story Name : Necromancers (LL)
Genre: Fantasy
Description:
Eve and Zeke are the last Necromancers. Demons ravel. Truths to be told. One big mistake can change everything in a few seconds. Remember it’s just the beginning of the end…
Instagram: @epi.enchantress
**Episode User Name: Madhu
Cover:
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That’s so weird. Thanks tho!