Moonlight’s Help Thread - Writing & Coding Help Here!


#1

Hello everyone.

I know some people are having trouble with their stories or their coding. My help thread is for that!

If you have writers’ block or some errors in your coding, ask me!

My name is Moonlight, by the way. Nice to meet you! Before you need help, please read my rules to make sure you won’t get flagged :wink:.

RULES

  1. No cursing
  2. No cyber bullying
  3. No drama
  4. Feel free to ask any sorts of help!

Okay, you guys okay after those rules? Well, let’s get started! Ask away, Kill be sure to answer!

Love,
Claire


#2

Are you online? Can you please help me?


#3

Yes, what do you need?


#4

so that’s my script:

label because_choice
readerMessage Choose wisely, this will affect your relationship with Rafael.
JADE (talk_doubtful)
Because…
choice
“You put up a fight with Xaver after kissing me. You think I wouldn’t find out?” {
gain rafael_1stpoint
JADE (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
You put up a fight with Xaver after kissing me. You think I wouldn’t find out?

    RAFAEL (talk_startled)
I-I didn't!

    JADE (talk_apathetic)
Of course you didn't.

    JADE (talk_arms_crossed)
That's why when I read your mind I found a memory with you fighting Xav.

    RAFAEL (talk_exhausted)
Look Jade... I'm just worried about you is all. He's a player after all.

    JADE (talk_angry)
You know I can't fall in love after what happened with Nick. Why get so upset about this?

&JADE starts talk_startled
&JADEN starts talk_startled
RAFAEL (talk_angry)
I’m just worried about my twin sister, is that so bad?
&RAFAEL starts deepbreath
&JADE starts dustoff_loop
JADEN (talk_awkward)
Dude relax…
&JADE starts arms_crossed

} “You stopped me from making the teacher send me to the principal’s office. I could have skipped this period this way!” {
gain rafael_nopoint
JADE (talk_angry)
You could have just let me do my thing.

    JADE (talk_apathetic)
But no, if Rafael's the good boy, then Jade needs to be a good girl too.

    RAFAEL (talk_arms_crossed)
You're so immature.

    JADE (talk_shrug)
Doesn't bother me.

} “Lol no reason I just like teasing people to make them feel bad.”{
NARR
Jade is not a bully. Try again.
goto because_choice
}
RAFAEL (eyeroll)
Anyway.
&JADEN starts arms_crossed
RAFAEL (talk_arms_crossed)
Jaden told me you were sent to the principal’s office.

    RAFAEL (eyeroll)
Again.

    RAFAEL (talk_shrug)
Care to tell me what happened in there?

    JADE (eyeroll_subtle)
He made Xaver mentor me.

    JADEN (talk_gossip)
Well that can either end well or terribly bad.

    RAFAEL (disappointed)
Most likely the second one, I don't trust this idiot.

if (rafael_1stpoint) {
JADE (think)
(I don’t get it.)
(He has no problem with me flirting with guys, he knows I can’t fall in love, and he also knows I can protect myself.)
(Why would he be so protective of me and why would he block me out of the full memory?)
(I don’t like this.)

    JADE (talk_shrug)
Look, I don't know what you problem is, you know I won't fall in love.

    JADE (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
You don't want to tell me why you are so protective over me even if you made it clear you know I won't fall for him, then fine, don't tell me.

    JADE (talk_doubtful)
But you have to stop bossing me around on how I should feel about people and what I do with them.

    RAFAEL (talk_doubtful)
Do you really want to have this conversation in front of Jaden?

    JADEN (talk_doubtful)
I'm not that much of a stranger guys.

    RAFAEL (eyeroll)
Anyway.

} elif (rafael_nopoint) {
JADE (talk_apathetic)
Do you have a problem with Xav?

    RAFAEL (eyeroll)
No.

    JADE (eyeroll_subtle)
Right.

    RAFAEL (talk_shrug)
Anyway.

}
else {
JADE (talk_apathetic)
Do you have a problem with Xav?

    RAFAEL (eyeroll)
No.

    JADE (eyeroll_subtle)
Right.

    RAFAEL (talk_shrug)
Anyway.

}

    RAFAEL (talk_shrug)
Is that why you've been on your phone all day?

my problem is that when I choose the second choice, then when it goes to the if/elif/else it will go to the first gain!It’s like it doesn’t remember the choice. Can anyone help me?