MrBitPlayer’s Review Thread (Open)

[MrBitPlayer]

Looking to do story reviews. Not Review4Reviews or R4R’s, just drop your story deets below and I’ll read it.

Due to school and other life things I can only rate the story based on the first two episodes only. I will try to be fair but I do grade harshly so don’t feel some type of way.

I’ll rate your story (1-5).

Form

Story Title:
Author:
Description:
Link:
Cover:

Ratings

1 : Needs Improvement

2 : Not My Cup of Tea

3 : Decent

4 : Great Story and Good Execution

5 : Perfect Story

I’d appreciate of you give my story a read too, (although it’s not required), but I would be happy

My Stories

Title: Lost Desires
Genre: Young Adult Drama
Style: Limelight
Description: You and Leo both have trouble finding meaning in life. When you stumble across each other, can a newfound love lead to a breakthrough for you both?
Features: Customization, 4 MC’s, Minigames, Advanced Directing, TV Drama Feel, Choices Matter
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6253275339161600

Title: Run Away ~ Love
Genre: Teen Drama/Romance
Style: Limelight
Description: Running away from home and living with your crush couldn’t be hard enough, who knew being a teen would be such a challenge?
Features: Customization, Love Interest, Complex Story, Advanced Directing, Choices Matter, Episodic Feel
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4840041316483072

• Call of Duty By Katherine Evans

• Necromancers By Madhu

• The Art of Criminal Profiling By Sam

• Treasure in You By L.Q. Walter

[Makayla.Reed]

Story Title: The XO’s
Author: Makayla.reed
Description:

Link:

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The XO's

Cover:

Summary

[Liz_Mar.episode]

Thanks for this thread

Story name:

High on Love and Formaldehyde

AUTHOR: Liz & Mar

GENRE: Romance/Drama

Chapters So Far: 13

STYLE: Limelight

IG: @ liz_mar.episode

DESCRIPTION: Working at a morgue is what Eliana loves but when her life gets darker than her job, she’ll need all the support she can get. Who’ll bring back the light in the dark?

CC, LL, Art

MATURE CONTENT

**Song recommendations to play while reading certain scenes are shown throughout the story **

Story Link

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: High on Love and Formaldehyde

Personal link including playlist

@Liz_Mar.episode

[MrBitPlayer]

Accepted!

[MrBitPlayer]

Accepted!

[JasminaH]

Story Title: Dying For You
Author: Jasmina H
Description: Annie led a busy life as a loved pop star. Little did she realise that she was about to be dragged into a nightmare, the likes of which could not have entered her wildest dreams!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6375650007121920
Cover:

[MrBitPlayer]

Accepted!

[JasminaH]

Yay!

[Liz_Mar.episode]

Thank you

[sonder.author]

Hello! Hope you’re doing fine!
I would love to hear your thoughts about my story! If you wanna see or learn more about my story, you can check out my Instagram.
Here is my story.

Title: 𝕸𝖞 𝕹𝖊𝖎𝖌𝖍𝖇𝖔𝖗 𝖎𝖘 𝖆 𝕸𝖔𝖇𝖘𝖙𝖊𝖗.
Author: Sonder.
Instagram: @sonder.author
Genre: Drama, Romance
Style: Limelight
Story Description: 𝑀𝑒𝑒𝑡 𝑤𝑖𝑡𝘩 𝐿𝑒𝑛𝑘𝑎 𝑅𝑒𝑑𝑠𝑡𝑜𝑛𝑒 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑁𝑌 𝑚𝑜𝑏𝑠𝑡𝑒𝑟 𝑁𝑖𝑘𝑙𝑎𝑢𝑠 𝑅𝑒𝑒𝑐𝑒. 𝐿𝑒𝑛𝑘𝑎 𝑖𝑠 𝑎 𝑠𝑡𝑟𝑜𝑛𝑔 𝑤𝑜𝑚𝑎𝑛 𝑤𝑖𝑡𝘩 𝑎 𝑔𝑜𝑜𝑑 𝑏𝑎𝑐𝑘𝑔𝑟𝑜𝑢𝑛𝑑 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑁𝑖𝑘𝑙𝑎𝑢𝑠 𝑖𝑠 𝑎 𝘩𝑎𝑟𝑑 𝑚𝑎𝑛 𝑡𝑜 𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑑. 𝑊𝘩𝑒𝑛 𝐿𝑒𝑛𝑘𝑎 𝑟𝑎𝑛 𝑎𝑤𝑎𝑦 𝑓𝑟𝑜𝑚 𝘩𝑒𝑟 𝑂𝑊𝑁 𝑒𝑛𝑔𝑎𝑔𝑒𝑚𝑒𝑛𝑡 𝑝𝑎𝑟𝑡𝑦 𝑡𝘩𝑒𝑦 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑎𝑙𝑙𝑦 𝑚𝑒𝑒𝑡. 𝐴𝑛𝑑 𝑡𝘩𝑒 𝑚𝑎𝑛 𝑙𝑜𝑠𝑒𝑠 𝘩𝑖𝑚𝑠𝑒𝑙𝑓 𝑖𝑛 𝘩𝑒𝑟 𝑠𝑐𝑒𝑛𝑡. (𝐿𝐿) 𝐶𝘩𝑜𝑖𝑐𝑒𝑠 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 𝑚𝑎𝑡𝑡𝑒𝑟 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑡𝘩𝑒𝑟𝑒 𝑤𝑖𝑙𝑙 𝑏𝑒 𝑜𝑛𝑙𝑦 𝑜𝑛𝑒 𝑙𝑜𝑣𝑒 𝑖𝑛𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑒𝑠𝑡. (𝐼 𝑓𝑖𝑛𝑑 𝑠𝑡𝑜𝑟𝑖𝑒𝑠 𝑤𝑖𝑡𝘩 𝑚𝑢𝑙𝑡𝑖𝑝𝑙𝑒 𝑙𝑜𝑣𝑒 𝑖𝑛𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑒𝑠𝑡𝑠 𝑢𝑛𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑙𝑖𝑠𝑡𝑖𝑐.)

𝖳𝗁𝗂𝗌 𝗂𝗌 𝗇𝗈𝗍 𝖺 𝗎𝗌𝗎𝖺𝗅 𝗆𝗈𝖻𝗌𝗍𝖾𝗋 / 𝗆𝖺𝖿𝗂𝖺 / 𝗀𝖺𝗇𝗀𝗌𝗍𝖾𝗋 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒. 𝖳𝗁𝗂𝗌 𝗂𝗌 𝗆𝗈𝗋𝖾 𝗅𝗂𝗄𝖾 𝖺 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒 𝖺𝖻𝗈𝗎𝗍 𝗁𝗈𝗐 𝖼𝖺𝗇 𝗍𝗐𝗈 𝗌𝗍𝗋𝗈𝗇𝗀 𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗋𝖺𝖼𝗍𝖾𝗋𝗌 𝖼𝖺𝗇 𝖿𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗂𝗇 𝗅𝗈𝗏𝖾 𝖾𝖺𝖼𝗁 𝗈𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗁𝗈𝗐 𝗐𝗈𝗋𝗄𝗌 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 𝗋𝖾𝗅𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗉.

𝗖𝗵𝗼𝗶𝗰𝗲𝘀 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗯𝗲 𝗺𝗮𝘁𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗶𝘀 𝗮 𝗽𝗼𝗶𝗻𝘁 𝘀𝘆𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗺 𝘄𝗵𝗶𝗰𝗵 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗽𝗮𝘁𝗵 𝘆𝗼𝘂’𝗹𝗹 𝘄𝗮𝗹𝗸.

Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4728753642864640

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[MrBitPlayer]

Accepted!

[MrBitPlayer]

@Makayla.Reed @JasminaH @sonder.author @Liz_Mar.episode

I’ll have these all done before 10 am (Eastern Standard) tmrw!

[Makayla.Reed]

Thank you so much!

[Liz_Mar.episode]

Thank you love

[Roy]

Thank you for doing this, beautiful. Here’s my story. Feel free to rate.

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Shado *10*

[MrBitPlayer]

Waitlisted!

[episode_katherinee]

Hello @MrBitPlayer! Thank you for creating this thread! I would love to get a story review from you if that is possible!

Story Title: Call of Duty
Author: Katherine Evans
Description: Isabella has been assigned as an undercover agent to arrest a crime lord. With a materialistic, rich, and arrogant bad boy as her partner, can she succeed? [cc]
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5281177222316032
Cover:

Hope to hear from you very soon!

[Madhu]

Hello! Heres my story i would love a review

Story: Necromancers LL

Author: Madhu
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6531970718957568
Instagram: @sm._.writes

[MrBitPlayer]

@Madhu & @episode_katherinee Waitlisted

[sammifred456]

Thanks for the thread! Can’t wait to hear your feedback

Instagram: @epi.sam.writes

Title: The Art of Criminal Profiling

Genre: Mystery

Style: Limelight

Chapters: 6 and more coming soon

Description:
Can Valentina, a successful FBI agent, decode a series of bone chilling mysteries before it’s too late? If not, she may just lose everything and everyone she cares about.

Customization:
Full customization other than not being able to change the MC’s skin color. Both LIs are fully customizable.

Choices:
There are numerous point systems with choices that matter.

Mini games and sound are incorporated into the story.

Hope you check it out

episodeinteractive.com

The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The Art of Criminal Profiling