Multiple Choices won't work

Help needed!! I’m writing a story at the moment and something won’t work. I want to do a multiple choice where the reader can choose their outfit. However, there happens to be a ‘script error’.
It keeps saying that ‘choices must follow dialogue immediately, not a branch.’ and I don’t know where I went wrong. Here is what I have done so far for my script.

    SILVIA (think_rubchin)
(I should get an outfit ready for tomorrow)

(but what should I wear?)

choice
“Chilled”{

@SILVIA exits right in 2

@pause for 1

@SILVIA changes into Chilled

@SILVIA enters from right to screen center in 2

    SILVIA (think_rubchin)
(Is this what I want to wear?)

choice
“No, let me change again”{

goto clothing_choice

}
“YES, I look great!”{

    SILVIA (primp_neutral)
(Perfect)

}

}
choice
“Chic”{

@SILVIA exits right

@SILVIA changes into Chic

@pause for 2

@SILVIA enters from right to screen center

@zoom on 160 284 to 100% in 0
@SILVIA spot 1.280 167 30
@SILVIA moves to layer 3

@speechbubble is 203 294 to 100% with tail_top_left
SILVIA
(Is this what I want to wear?)

choice
“No, let me change again”{

goto clothing_choice

}
“YES, I look great!”{

    SILVIA (primp_neutral)
(Perfect)

}

}
choice
“Fierce”{

@SILVIA exits right

@SILVIA changes into Fierce

@SILVIA enters from right to screen center

@zoom on 160 284 to 100% in 0
@SILVIA spot 1.454 159 -28
@SILVIA moves to layer 3

@speechbubble is 203 294 to 100% with tail_top_left
SILVIA
(Is this what I want to wear?)

choice
“No, let me change again”{

goto clothing_choice

}
“YES, I look great!”{

    SILVIA (primp_neutral)
(Perfect)

}

}
choice
“Smart”{

@SILVIA exits right

@SILVIA changes into Work_Outfit

@SILVIA enters from right to screen center

@zoom on 160 284 to 100% in 0
@SILVIA spot 1.454 159 -28
@SILVIA moves to layer 3

@speechbubble is 203 294 to 100% with tail_top_left
SILVIA
(Is this what I want to wear?)

choice
“No, let me change again”{

goto clothing_choice

}
“YES, I look great!”{

    SILVIA (primp_neutral)
(Perfect)

}

}

you don’t need to put the word “choice” before every types of clothes. Just keep the first one and remove the others

oh okay, i’ll try that. thank you!

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