I am Giorgio, from Italy, and I have just discovered Episode. I am a technical writer and a programmer, so I was immediately fascinated by the idea of trying out Donacode and writing a small story.
Would you like to read its draft? It is still “work in progress” and there is much work to do before (eventually) publishing it.
- I need to add some choices (where would you like them?)
- I need proofreading (I am not a native English speaker, but I have a friend who will do it for me)
- There are some timing bugs to solve.
I would just like your opinions on the story and its general flavor!
This is the link, if someone wants to check it:
Thanks in advance! Hugs!