Hello everyone, I finally published my first Story.
But personally I am not quite happy with it. I also do think my chapters are way to short… I wanted to create a story since 2017 I guess, but just a few weeks ago I finally startet to learn how to actually script them.
So this story isn’t the best, but I would apreciate some feedback and tips on how I can make this story better. Also would do r4r and we can exchange feedback
My Story is called the Kingdom of Twilight
My Episode Name is ItNeverEnds / Jessica R. Skyes
I currently published 4 Chapters
Genre: Fantasy
Congrats on publishing Well, I really need to study for my math’s test, which I have tomorrow, so I will read & give you feedback later Again, congratulations!!!
Hi love!
My story is unpublished and I just have 5 episodes for now.
But it would be great for me to have any type of feedback, you know.
I can give you a read and my most honest opinion on your whole story, if you want. You can count on me!
Description:
15 years since we’ve been deemed useless and deported to Earth. Now, we reunite to solve the supernatural murders and as past becomes present, our mistakes become fatal…
Hi! Thank you for making this thread. I would love to do a R4R with you if you are interested.
Title: Twisted Heart
Description: Scarlet thought she had “the perfect life” until her husband passed away. She moves to a new city where she meets two handsome men who fight for her heart. Who will win?
That’s really kind of you 
Do you have an episode instagram?
