My first story! I need some feedback, please. (I also do r4r)

Hello everyone, I finally published my first Story.
But personally I am not quite happy with it. I also do think my chapters are way to short… I wanted to create a story since 2017 I guess, but just a few weeks ago I finally startet to learn how to actually script them.
So this story isn’t the best, but I would apreciate some feedback and tips on how I can make this story better. Also would do r4r and we can exchange feedback

My Story is called the Kingdom of Twilight
My Episode Name is ItNeverEnds / Jessica R. Skyes
I currently published 4 Chapters
Genre: Fantasy


Congrats on publishing :two_hearts: Well, I really need to study for my math’s test, which I have tomorrow, so I will read & give you feedback later :wink::hugs::two_hearts: Again, congratulations!!! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:


Thank you :orange_heart: That’s really kind of you :slight_smile: :smiling_face:
Good luck for your math test tommorow :two_hearts:

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Congrats! I just read the first episode, it was great, just a bit short :heart: Do you have an episode instagram?


Congrats on publishing your first story! As an aspiring writer like you, I understand the mixed feelings of completing a project. It’s great that you took the initiative to learn how to turn your ideas into a story. Improvement is an ongoing process, and it’s great that you’re looking for feedback and advice on improving your work. I’m also learning by constantly honing my writing skills through online courses and resources. One platform that has been particularly helpful to me is which I use while studying. Their authors help me improve my writing, and their expertise improves my writing. Feel free to explore their services for more recommendations. Keep writing, keep learning, and your stories will develop beautifully! Keep up the passion for storytelling. Good luck to you.

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Thank you :blush::smiling_face:

Thank you a lot :slight_smile: I have a general writing Instagram Account, as I also publish stories on Inkitt and Wattpad. My name ist @jessicaskyes_author

Hi!! :blob_hearts:
I would be interested in doing some R4R!

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Sure, what’s your Story Title and Episode Name? :smiling_face: And how many chapters do we want to read?

Hi love! :heartbeat:
My story is unpublished and I just have 5 episodes for now.
But it would be great for me to have any type of feedback, you know.
I can give you a read and my most honest opinion on your whole story, if you want. You can count on me! :heart_hands: :butterfly:

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Hey! I’m up for r4r <3

Story: The Unwanted
Genre: Mystery
Insta: @evilyn.writes
Episodes: 14
Style: Ink

15 years since we’ve been deemed useless and deported to Earth. Now, we reunite to solve the supernatural murders and as past becomes present, our mistakes become fatal…

Advanced directing/ overlays etc.


Thanks :hugs:

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I’d love to do a R4R with you if you’re interested!

Find me on IG and maybe we can do a r4r @stine_stories

Hi! Thank you for making this thread. I would love to do a R4R with you if you are interested.

Title: Twisted Heart

Description: Scarlet thought she had “the perfect life” until her husband passed away. She moves to a new city where she meets two handsome men who fight for her heart. Who will win?

Style: LL

Genre: Drama

Status: 4 Chapters Published, Ongoing

My insta: @safi.episode

URL: Episode Writer Portal

Congrats on publishing! I’m down for a R4R. Let me know if you’re interested :grin:

Title: Without a Trace
Genre: Mystery/Thriller
Chapters: 20 (Ongoing)
Description: After her sister vanishes, Talulah sets out on an investigative search with the help of arcane criminology major, Avon. Will their perseverance and wit be enough to find her?
Link: Episode Writer Portal
Instagram: @jcwhisper.writes

Thank you :purple_heart:

Thankyou so much for this thread… :blush: :blush:
Title:- Queen Of Hell
Gerne:- Action
Instagram Acc:- @sapphire_ecrivain
No. of episodes:- 4 (On going)
Love Interest:- 1 (no option)
Discription:- The most dangerous assassin and the heiress of the Italian Mafia with the rivalry of the Russian Mafia King. What will happen when they cross paths?
Link :- Episode Writer Portal
I’m down for R4R (3x3) & G4G :wink: :wink:

:cherries: TROUBLE IN PARADISE :cherries:
A mysterious illness has taken over the two opposing realms: angels and demons. Will they find a cure, or will their long-time feud get in the way? |CC|fantasy/romance|
This story is part of “The Write Stuff” Contest so I would really appreciate if you checked it out!
I’m also up for r4r, just dm me on @maroulakiepisode