Hello everyone, I finally published my first Story.
But personally I am not quite happy with it. I also do think my chapters are way to short… I wanted to create a story since 2017 I guess, but just a few weeks ago I finally startet to learn how to actually script them.
So this story isn’t the best, but I would apreciate some feedback and tips on how I can make this story better. Also would do r4r and we can exchange feedback
My Story is called the Kingdom of Twilight
My Episode Name is ItNeverEnds / Jessica R. Skyes
I currently published 4 Chapters
My story is unpublished and I just have 5 episodes for now.
But it would be great for me to have any type of feedback, you know.
I can give you a read and my most honest opinion on your whole story, if you want. You can count on me!