My first story! I need some feedback, please. (I also do r4r)

Hello everyone, I finally published my first Story.
But personally I am not quite happy with it. I also do think my chapters are way to short… I wanted to create a story since 2017 I guess, but just a few weeks ago I finally startet to learn how to actually script them.
So this story isn’t the best, but I would apreciate some feedback and tips on how I can make this story better. Also would do r4r and we can exchange feedback

My Story is called the Kingdom of Twilight
My Episode Name is ItNeverEnds / Jessica R. Skyes
I currently published 4 Chapters
Genre: Fantasy


Congrats on publishing :two_hearts: Well, I really need to study for my math’s test, which I have tomorrow, so I will read & give you feedback later :wink::hugs::two_hearts: Again, congratulations!!! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Thank you :orange_heart: That’s really kind of you :slight_smile: :smiling_face:
Good luck for your math test tommorow :two_hearts:

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Congrats! I just read the first episode, it was great, just a bit short :heart: Do you have an episode instagram?

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Great story. Congrats!

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Thank you :blush::smiling_face:

Thank you a lot :slight_smile: I have a general writing Instagram Account, as I also publish stories on Inkitt and Wattpad. My name ist @jessicaskyes_author

Hi!! :blob_hearts:
I would be interested in doing some R4R!

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Sure, what’s your Story Title and Episode Name? :smiling_face: And how many chapters do we want to read?

Hi love! :heartbeat:
My story is unpublished and I just have 5 episodes for now.
But it would be great for me to have any type of feedback, you know.
I can give you a read and my most honest opinion on your whole story, if you want. You can count on me! :heart_hands: :butterfly:

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Hey! I’m up for r4r <3

Story: The Unwanted
Genre: Mystery
Insta: @evilyn.writes
Episodes: 14
Style: Ink

15 years since we’ve been deemed useless and deported to Earth. Now, we reunite to solve the supernatural murders and as past becomes present, our mistakes become fatal…

Advanced directing/ overlays etc.


Thanks :hugs:

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I’d love to do a R4R with you if you’re interested!

Find me on IG and maybe we can do a r4r @stine_stories

Hi! Thank you for making this thread. I would love to do a R4R with you if you are interested.

Title: Twisted Heart

Description: Scarlet thought she had “the perfect life” until her husband passed away. She moves to a new city where she meets two handsome men who fight for her heart. Who will win?

Style: LL

Genre: Drama

Status: 4 Chapters Published, Ongoing

My insta: @safi.episode

URL: Episode Writer Portal