Hi guys, I’ve just published my first story and It would mean a lot if you wanted to check it out 
I would REALLY like your HONEST opinions about it, like: What you thought was good, what you thought was bad, what to do better, and your generel advise.
I also do r4r, if anyone is interested!
@raytales_episode
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