Amazing
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Thank You
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K I finished again 
btw my phone was glitching last time so ignore the statement about not being able to see the characters at the end in my last post.
Errors
Yeet idk if it’s supposed to be Rachel’s not Rachel’
Him and I but this is way better than putting me and him
Most of us can’t go to school shirtless
lucky them…jk lol
This part probably needs adjustment
She’s overlapping her
Dw I just ss quickly and the words didn’t show till after the screenshot. But her she was like moonwalking.
That’s all my eyes got.
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OK thank you I will correct them
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Hey! So I see you are doing a R4R, let’s do one!!!
How about 3?
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what do you mean 3
Three episodes;)
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i will add you to my list
Can we do a read for read?
My story
Story name: MC: The Golden Line
Author: Shana Ravi
Genre: Romsnce, Fantasy and Murder
I’m on my phone so I can’t write description. 
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Thankssss!
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Brutally honest review.
Plot: I think you could have slowed it down a little and make longer and more interesting episodes. Maybe more choices.
Interest: I was intrigued in the 2nd episode. But the first one was a little boring.
Characters: You definitely need to work on layers and spot directing. But it’s not that bad.
Character pics
Overall: Its a great story for a beginner writer. I was never this good when I started out. A few minor spelling mistakes.
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thank you
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So I read your first 2 episodes, I found them entertaining though I suggest you revise the spotting and layering.
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Anytime. If you ever make a story and looking for review. Stop by Prashansa’s Story review store.
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what’s your story
Tied Together by Molly 
Oh btw finished your story it was amazing!
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thank you
I’m down!
Story: Blades of Desire
Author: Giselle C.
Genre: Mystery/Horror/Drama/Romance
Description: You thought going from rich to poor is the worst thing that could happen to you. Think again… a hot murderer is in town and he’s looking for you.
Features: Advanced directing, non-cliche plot line, choices matter, FULL character customization, unique and big closet, POC and LGBTQ characters, LGBTQ option, mini games.
Episodes: 3, 4 coming soon.
Covers:
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Update R4R’s now closed