I just released my first story broken tears.
please let me know about any mistakes I may have made
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Sounds interesting! I would be willing to do a r4r with you if you would like! 
Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: āAnd thatās how weāll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.ā When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960
I just read the first three episodes of your story and Iām already hooked, you donāt see many text stories on episode so props for that. your story is really good and the plot twists are even better. keep doing what youāre doing.
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I really liked it but when the characters talk why are the text bubbles so small at the beginning
I didnāt want the speech bubbles to cover anything (faces, hands, etc) or be too far from the characters mouth.
Moved to Promote Your Story since this is for promotion and R4Rs. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to PM me if there are any questions. 
would you like to do a r4r? I can also give you an in-depth review if you would like?
Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Summary: Itās a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited toā¦ Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
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Iām changing my current one, so this will be my new one soon enough! 
Chapters: 4 (More to come)
Create your own characters and Choices Matter!
Hey, I just finished your story and i love it 
I like the Charakter and i like it that you have a lot of, choices in your story 
Soo i didnāt saw any mistakes 
keep writing 
And to proofā¦
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@Marshmallow_O Iām sorry Iām took so long to respond I was watching the good place, Iāve so far only seen the first episode and so far Iām really liking the story although I did notice that ash isnāt wearing any pants (probs a glitch) and that Luna has no hair (maybe that isnāt a glitch tho) other than that I love it, Iām gonna go keep reading it, keep doing what your doing
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haha thanks! sorry about the glitch! yea itās definitely an episode glitch! just be sure to exit the story and re-enter it! thanks for reading! 
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@Nency_episode thankyou so much Iāve been working really hard on this story and if you have any storyās of your own I would love to read them
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Yes, i have a Story itās my first so im sorry, if there any mistakes 
. I would like it, when you could give me a feedback, what I could do better
Details to my story:
titel : Breaking my psychos walls
style : INK
Genre : Adventure
Author : Neserin.creating
Chapters : 4 ( more coming soon)
description : Ayden Walters known as a psycho, is out of jail!! And goes undercover to catch a killer in a High School , what will Happen? Will he find the killer bevore he keep killing people? find out Adventure, Comedy, murders, and moreā¦
Hello! 
I am a new author trying to promote my new story Queen!! This story does contain character customization and choices do matter! Hope you give my story a read and enjoy. Any feedback/ critique is much appreciated!
I am totally open for a r4r.
Story Name : Queen
Author : Steffi
Genre : Drama, Romance
Status : 3 episodes at the moment, more coming soon
Style : Limelight
Instagram : @steffi.episode
Description: All her life, Devina was raised learning the ways of being a proper lady of the nobility. But her life is suddenly disrupted when a royal advisor visits and reveals to her that she is the next monarch of Artesia. WIll she reign? Or will she renounce her claim to the throne? Will she choose love or duty? Itās all up to you!!
@STEFFI01 I just finished reading the first episode of your story and I can already tell its gonna be a good one, personally I love stories just like this one where the timeline is like 1800(although that may not be the timeline) and the main character is in love with another man or standing up for womans rights. this story so far is really good and I like the advanced directing although on some scenes the characters seem to be moving so much they slide instead of walk, for scenes like these I would use basic directing but if you like it like that then who am I to judge keep it up!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read mine. I will definitely be checking out yours later today! The choice is really all up to you. You can make Devina (MC) have actual feelings (love) for Taren (one of her dearest friends) or for their relationship to just be friends. Itās really up to the reader to decide. As the story progresses you will learn why Devina (MC) is the way she is (strong female character). I donāt want to spoil too much
Do you happen to have an Instagram? So I can tag you when I do read your story.
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@Nency_episode alright so I just finished the first episode and the plot is really good although the English isnāt very good(maybe it wasnāt your first language?) the characters seem to slide a lot
so for this, I would recommend you add pauses
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@Nency_episode walks to spot 1.280 300 50
@pause for a beat
@Nency_episode starts think_neutral
the pauses help so that the character can have time to do the command.
other than that the story is really good, I really like it
I look forward to your next update!
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yes I do its @neverafawn
I appreciate the feedback 
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Yes, English is not my native language 
Thank you so much for reading my story and giving me feedback. Thanks for the advice it helped me a lot 
have a Great day 
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