don’t worry you’ll learn more about who Alyssa really is later on in the story 
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Hi guys 
I’ve just published my first story and I would be very happy if you could take a look
I’m also open for R4R
Story Name : The Deal
Author : Katherine94
Genre : Romance
Status : 3 episodes so far (but more coming soon!)
Style : INK
Description: Dalia lost all the people she loved. Everything changes when she moves to her best friend in California and meets Dean - adrenaline addict.
You may find a link for my story on my profile
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alright, so I just read the first episode and so far so good though I am noticing that when a character enters/exits a scene they get bigger or smaller. this a VERY common problem and I had trouble with it at first too.
just an example of how to fix that problem
EXP.
@Katherine94 spot 1.280 900 50 in zone 2
@Katherine94 walks to spot 1.280 900 50 in zone 3
this way they won’t change size as they enter or exit a scene
if you want a character to walk into the first zone
EXP.
@Katherine94 spot 1.280 -900 50 in zone 1
@Katherine94 walks to spot 1.280 900 50 in zone 1
other than that the story is good and I saw no other problems 
Thank you Nevera 
I truly appreciate your help I’ll try to fix the problem in the next chapter 
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