My first story ( kind feedback wanted)

Hi I am new to writing I am having trouble with the link but I just wrote a comedy story called Sugar & Spice if anyone wants to read it and give me some feedback I gladly appreciate it thanks

If you’re willing to give me some feedback on my first story, I’ll return the favour. Just send me a pm :slight_smile:

I sure would what is the story

I am Naeee from episode forum

I sent you a link to my story in a message and I also left my feedback there :slight_smile:

Hey if you want I can make you a cover?

I will give you my feed back shortly😁