My First Story - Opinions Please

Hello, I’ve officially published my very first story! Please check it out and let me know what you think and where I can improve on!

Title: Fear of The Truth
Genre: Romance


review for review?

Story: Blades of Desire

Author: Giselle C.

Genre: Mystery/Horror/Drama/Romance

Description: You thought going from rich to poor is the worst thing that could happen to you. Think again… a hot murderer is in town and he’s looking for you.

Features: Advanced directing, non-cliche plot line, choices matter, FULL character customization, unique and big closet, POC and LGBTQ characters, LGBTQ option, mini games.

Episodes: 4





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Hey! I see your story everywhere and it looks super interesting! Read for read? Or review for review?

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 3 (More to come)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Shortened Link:

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Sure! Want to do a review for review for the first 3 episodes?

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Yeah! I’ll start right now!:grin:

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We’ll PM each other an SS when done :slight_smile:

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