I like your idea but main characterâs name is Livi,and sheâll be the one who founds a first necklace thereâs 5 of them and they must find the 5th necklace holder to close: âThe Other Worldâ.
Personally, I wouldnât use questions in your description. They give too much away. You see, if you ask âwill she survive?â I now know this is a story about survival and, because this is Episode, I know the chances are that sheâll survive. Also, questions are awkward. Itâs like âI DONT KNOW. I HAVENT READ IT YETâ. Use your intro for a little more subtle but more alluring description.
I donât know too much about the story, but Iâll give it a try!
When Livi finds a mysterious necklace, sheâs thrown into the world of the dead. Now, she must find the other four necklaces to save her world before itâs too lateâŠ
Livi wasnât expecting to be transported to another world when she picked up the weird necklace in (place location here). But now she has a task to do. She needs to find the other four necklaces to save her world before itâs too late.
Theyâre not perfect, but they give more about the beginning away, and less about the end. Thatâs always the best way to go about it. Talk more about the first big plot point that happens and donât spend too much time asking questions about how it will end.
Also can you try to explain if you know anything about it like how do you credit someoneâs background and where do you find those pop up narrators that everyone uses for crediting backgrounds?
They are actually because itâs not their version of them from the other side itâs their regular ones besides it would take me years to make new one.