My first story & yours 😀


#1

Hello everybody! :laughing:
I have published my first story a month ago and I’d like to have feedback on it.
I have to tell you that I’m not English so there will be mistakes…sorry😯
For the moment, there are only 3 chapters released but other are coming soon :wink:
Title:Dark Side
Author:Merit
Teaser: When Tori’s parents get killed, she soon discover the true face of the government.
Follow her between fear and love…
The scene takes place in a future dystopian world

That’s all otherways you’ll be spoil :blush:
Thank you if you’re going to read my story❤
Feel free to let yours in comments and I’ll go read it if you read mine :wink:
Have a good day.
Bye!


#2

My story is called A Tempting Offer.
There are currently 4 chapters out. The 5th will be published soon.

I’m gonna read your story and give you a feedback.
Do you have any social media accounts where I can write you ? Like Instagram ?


#3

Thank you :grin:
I’ll read your story as well.
I don’t have Instagram so just message me here if that’s ok with you :blush:


#4

Can u read my story,
Kidnapped
By: RyRydoezepisode


#5

Oh yes sure! :grinning:


#6

Could you just send me the link I don’t find it :thinking:


#7

My first story is called Fantastical: Angels of Life. Would love it if you gave it a read :smiley:

Here’s a link :slight_smile: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4684771558686720


#8

Hi! I released my first story last week! I’ll be happy to read yours! If there are any corrections that I have I’ll try to send you a PM here and help you out! Thanks!

Title: Island Dreams: St. Anasazi Island
Author: Danyelle Cole (Dani)
Short Description: Ariana made it to the internship of her dreams on an incredible island! but the situations of her nightmares are coming back to stop her! Can she save herself and the planet?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5771958494691328
Episodes Released: 3


#9

Hello :blush:
Sure I’ll read it
Thank you :kissing_heart:


#10

:v:t2:

My New Story First One Ever!


#11

Hey! My friend and I published our story!
Story - Beneath The Surface
Authors - Liv B and Aimee
Genre - Action
Chapters out - 2
Description - Being a FBI agent was always your passion, but there is a dark side to every dream. Secrets appear and it’s up to you to find the truth. Can you discover it and finally move on?
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6172792320294912image


#12

Hi!
My first story is called Hannah.
There are currently 6 chapters out and I’ll be writing and publishing more once my second story Fantastical: Realm Revived is published!!

Title: Hannah.
Genre: Drama
Description: Hannah’s life is flipped upside down when she discovers her life’s a lie. It’s up to you to scream or enjoy the ride.
Author: Kim L. (profile: Kimelle)
Link: Hannah.
Chapter’s published: 6


#13

Hi :grin:
I’ll read it


#14

Hi!:grin:
I’ll read your story as soon as possible :wink:


#15

Thank you I’ll read it with pleasure


#16

Here is my first story
Title—> Choose!!!
Author—>@ya
Genra—> adventure /sci-fi
Description—>
You aren’t a superhero, nor have magical powers! Just a wrong wish of your’s , causes Fate of whole human race to be in your’s hands!!! Will you Succeed or face defeat?? (2 ends)
Link—>



Hope you like it :wink:


#17

Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re an average highschool girl. What’ll happen to your life when you get kidnapped by a pack of Hybrids that claim that you are their sacred Queen? CC, ChoicesMatter, 5Endings
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912
Instagram: emberpackepisode :smile:


#18

Hey! Would you mind reading my story and I will give you some feedback on yours- in addition if you need someone to proofread future episodes I can do that :slight_smile: my first language is English :slight_smile:

Title: Revival
Style: Ink
Episodes: 10
Author: Grace S
Description: Lillian Hayes is a professional criminal in a futuristic society. What happens when a mysterious boy challenges everything she’s ever known?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4762507897602048
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#19

Okay,I’ll read it :slight_smile:


#20

Thanks, I’m certainly going to like it😉