My first story ๐Ÿ™‚

Iโ€™ve just finished the first episode of my first story and I was wondering if anyone can read it for me to tell me if it needs anything (like more choices ect.)
If anyone wants to help I can DM you the link.
Thank you it would be really helpful

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Anyone want to help? :upside_down_face:

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Sure! I beta read a lot of peopleโ€™s story, and I can offer help with grammar, too. Can you send me the link please? Iโ€™d love to help. And congrats on your first story!!! :slight_smile:

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Hello @hamnah.epi, Iโ€™m Sydney the moderator. Welcome to the forum! :smiley: Iโ€™ve moved this thread to Share Feedback since youโ€™re looking for story feedback. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if youโ€™ve got questions. :wink:

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