My first story 🙂

I’ve just finished the first episode of my first story and I was wondering if anyone can read it for me to tell me if it needs anything (like more choices ect.)
If anyone wants to help I can DM you the link.
Thank you it would be really helpful


Anyone want to help? :upside_down_face:

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Sure! I beta read a lot of people’s story, and I can offer help with grammar, too. Can you send me the link please? I’d love to help. And congrats on your first story!!! :slight_smile:

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Hello @hamnah.epi, I’m Sydney the moderator. Welcome to the forum! :smiley: I’ve moved this thread to Share Feedback since you’re looking for story feedback. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :wink:

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