My first time writing a song!

My first time writing a song!
What do you think of the lyrics?


The darkness and no light

The warrior without fight,

That’s what I pay

Loneliness throughout the day

I’m gone

I’m gone

Do you notice I’m gone?

Am I there? Or am I nowhere?

Do you care?

Do you care?

Or am I invisible to your eyes

Do you think you’re hypnotized?

Am I not the one who died inside

Am I not the one who failed to show my pride

Am I not the one who’s invisible

Am I not the one?

Invisible, Invisible

Not the one

Not the one

You fail to catch me when I fall down.

You fail to throw me to the ground.

Am I in the middle?

The middle of the ghost town?

I tell you everything

It’s not what it seems

Stop going round


Stop acting like I’m not there

I’m the one who faces the most despair

The one with broken dreams

The one who seemed to vanish into invisibility

The darkness and no light

The warrior without fight

That’s what I pay

Maybe one day, it’ll be done

Maybe one day, I’ll be fine

Maybe that day will come and it’ll be mine

Until then, I guess I remain


The swiftness of your eyes reflect on the ocean

The desire from your heart feels lost

The soul you once knew

The soul you once loved

The soul now may rest in your heart

And it feels so invisible

So invisible

The darkness with no light,

The warrior without fight,

The reflection from my eyes

The waves clearly seen

The ones that were not only yours but the ones who felt free

Are now invisible

Just invisible

They vanished into your soul

The invisibility, the sensitivity

Loneliness throughout the day

Invisible in every way

There I am

Invisible to you

Invisible to you


Through the darkness there is light

Inside the warrior there is fight

That’s not what we pay

To see the loneliness in our day

We aren’t divided just united

Through the right and the wrong

Through the fight, remain strong

Without darkness there’s no light

Without a warrior there’s no fight

Without you there’s no me

Through the darkness and the light,

Through the day and the night,

Through the visible and unseen

There’s you

And there’s me.

Invisibility is our strength

The prize we gain

Being invisible


Loneliness only makes you stronger

Don’t wait any longer

If you’re invisible, I am too

@Ara_Elle_stories :relieved:


Dank sounds good :heart_eyes:


sksksk it’s my first time but thank youuu


Your most welcome :hot_face:

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That’s very beautiful! You should be a songwriter!


You almost made me cry :blush: this is beautiful :sparkling_heart:


Omg thats absolutely beautiful!! Like how? It’s so heart felt. Seriously I would not be able to do that. I’m really proud of you :blush:


nahh, i have my heart set on something else :sweat_smile:

but thank you so much!

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reallyyyy?! thank you, les!! :sparkling_heart: ly

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honestly, i think it sounds a little random… :weary:

ly, mate!

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Love you too mate

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BISH SNATCHED MYYT WIG LOVE IT!!! :sob: :heart_eyes:

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tHaNk yOu

snatching wigs is my thinggg

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Ahaha lol gurl damn keep it up talented! :laughing: :heavy_heart_exclamation:

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nahhh this is just something random lol

imma focus more on art but like yesss thank you for the talent props :clap:

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Lol np just keep doing you boo :heavy_heart_exclamation: :laughing:

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@Sydney_H could you please close this topic?

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I love it!! Songwriting is awsum :heart_eyes::heart_eyes::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs:


I thought it was great, a little sad tho

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