My first time writing


#1

Hi everyone

This is my first time writing and publishing on Episode. Please check out Fantasy Can Come Through, and tell me what you all think.

Thank you
Mzz JInn


#2

Id like to check out you story,and be a writing partner


#3

i read the first chapter, and tbh it doesn’t flow very well :frowning:


#4

Hehe I saw Caribbean, anyways I dropped my phone while reading your first chapter
While at the bar I think you were trying to zoom idk, but perhaps maybe have them in different zones then pan to Dominic and the girl, and if you could add some sound effects that would be lovely, overall I kinda liked it and if you could do a feedback on my story , the name is “Evil Hearts” , its a bout being seperated from your first love


#5

omg I absolutely love that story