My Little Witch - new story

Hello everyone! If you have time, I’d like you to read my very first story if possible. “My Little Witch”

So this is the plot " When she has just moved to a new city, Ella discovers that she has strange new powers. How will she react? Will she be able to use them properly? "

In this story, you could have a full CC and 2 LI.

I would really like to have your opinion, to know what I could change/improve, also if you think that my story interests you

Also, I am French, so it may be that sometimes, in my history, there are mistakes: grammaticales, vocabulary, conjugations… So if you could also notify me of errors it would be very nice of you.

Thanks you all for your time! :blush:

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Can you please add the link to your story sweetness :lollipop:??? It makes it easier for us to go straight to your story and read it.

Merci beaucoup!!!

Oh sorry I forgot it ! No problems! Here it is! :blush:

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:rofl::rofl::rofl:

Tu vas bien!!!

Super et toi?

Are you french too? Or did you just know somes french words? :blush:

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Tres bien! Merci! :blush:

Moi??? Non!!!

Je sais juste assez pour avoir des ennuis!!! :rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl:

But, I am Creole… so I can read and understand some. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Ahahah, I think it’s good to have some notions in other languages! ^^

Congrat’! Because French is not the easiest language x)

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