My Lovers Bite ~ New Story

could you guys check out my new story and tell me what you think? it would mean a lot :two_hearts:
it’s called ‘My Lovers Bite’

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If you put the link in the post instead of in the title, people can click on it directly and get to your story. Right now they have to copy-paste, which can be hard with a hyperlink in discourse. Also, the title of this doesn’t explain anything about your story.

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thank you!

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Hey :grinning: if you want i could give a rewiew for your story
:hugs: i would be happy to help you :blush::kissing_heart: but i would give you the rewiew tomorrow :smile: if it is okey :slightly_smiling_face:

thank you!!

I’ll give it a read and post my review tomorrow. :slight_smile:
Is there any specifics you’d like for people to constructively give recommendations on?

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grammar and directing tips are great! ty for reviewing it

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Okay, so I just read it. I had to drive my husband to the airport so I didnt get a chance til just now. Lol

But I’ve written notes. I’ll PM you tomorrow with my notes… It’s almost midnight here. But I will say, I like it so far. :grin: