Hey, so I read all three chapters.
Chapter one is fine until the end and then going into chapter two I was really confused. The story starts with her stating she’s getting married. Then it flashes back to highschool, Liam is now her boyfriend who she breaks up with and then she meets Josh. After being totally confused about who she’s with I realised the flashback never ended. The basic story is good but I think somehow it’s needs to be made clearer about what time we’re viewing and who she’s actually with as this seems to be the main storyline.
I noticed an odd spelling and punctuation mistake and she walks onto the bed too. (Maybe it would be better to sit her and then lay her down on the bed).
I hope this helps.