I just published a story.
Please read It and tell my what you think.
- Name : JACKPOT
- Genre : Mystery,Action,Romantic
- Description : Your life changes when you inherit the number one casino from your gradpnfather.Will you save a casino or will you givi it to your brother. (CC) (Choice matters) Two endings.
Episode 4 coming out very soom.
I think almost every person on this forum helped me with this story.Thank you for that.(At the end of epsode 2 you will see credits,find your name there.
1 Like
Omg its really Cool!
There are some Problems:
• The Character Layers
• Wrong English-Spelling
Hope this will help you make the Story better!
AND Yes i will continue reading!
Yeah I know about spelling,but I’m not from English-speaking country and It’s hard to write a whole story without some “errors” I will definitely try to make.it better.
Also can you tell me where is the layering promblem,so.I can fix it?
1 Like
About the Layer Problem:
At the Beginning of the Scene, where Rose was dancing with Peoples I saw errors.
Thank you for telling me I will go fix that now
1 Like
Oh and Btw, I recommend using Audio/Sounds to make it even better!