My new story! (PLEASE READ)

Please read my story!
And give feedback!

I have put a lot of work into the directing of this one, so hope it’s good!
But it all depends on your guys’ opinions!


would you like to do a r4r? :grin:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Style: Limelight
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.



Chapters: 5 (More to come)

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Yes, I’d love to!

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great! i’ll PM you ss when i’m done! :grin:

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How come my link is different to yours?

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And okay!

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you shared the wrong link with me, share the one at the bottom of the screen in the writer portal

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Thanks, done!

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If you refresh it, it should be there

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is it bad?

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well no, but i just got through episode 1 and it violates the guidelines…

basically you can’t make a story out of another tv show.

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Why? What if I got permission from the writers?

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Do you want r4r

Here’s my story The Star Necklace

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

How do you get rid of a story?

That’s already been published

I read the first chapter

I don’t know how

Nice story… I liked the point system

Did it work for you then?