My script is all messed up. I'm trying to allow charcater to choose

EXT. BRICK MANSION - DAY

@JESSIE walks to screen center

NARRATOR
Do like your apperance?

label avatar_0

NARRATOR
Customize yourself!

choice
“Customize character”{
@JESSIE goes to character avatar
goto avatar_0
}
“Use profile avatar”{
@JESSIE becomes female profile
goto avatar_0
}
“I look perfect!”{
}

NARRATOR
You look great!

NARRATOR
What is your dating preference?

choice
“I’m interested in guys”{

INT. COFFEE SHOP FROM STAGE OL - NIGHT

JESSIE (yawn_bored)

goto guy_love

}“I’m interested in girls”{

ALEX
Hey, Sexy, I’m Alex.

JESSIE
I’m Jessie.

ALEX
You waiting on someone?

JESSIE
Yeah, but I got stood up.

ALEX (react_shocked_gasp)
You got stood up.
WOw. Can I keep you company?

goto girl_love

}

label guy_love

STEPHON (talk_handraised_happy_loop)
Umm…
Hi I’m Stephon

JESSIE
UMM…
Hi, I’m Jessie

STEPHON
What is a pretty girl like you doing here all alone? And who are you?

JESSIE
(OMG HE WAS CHECKING ME OUT!! STAY CALM)

NARRATOR
WHAT WILL YOU SAY TO THE SEXY STRANGER.

choice
Your future girlfriend” {

STEPHON (flirt_fingerbite_sexy)
Great! will you have a drink with me sometime.

JESSIE (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Of course. Let’s do it now! My company bailed anyways.

NARRATOR
They spent the night partying and drinking.

STEPHON (admire_happy)
Okay! Tell me about your favourite Christmas memory?

JESSIE (talk_asif_annoyed)
I don’t celebrate Christmas. I HATE IT!

STEPHON (react_lay_shocked)
Why! What happened that made you hate Christmas so much?

JESSIE (cry_sniff_sad_loop)
My whole family died on Christmas… I survived. Christmas just brings back bad memories.

STEPHON
Sorry to lift your sprits we can head to a party. Small party my friend is hosting. He lost his family too. He can relate.

JESSIE
Sure! Let’s go.

INT. BBG HOUSE PARTY - NIGHT

ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
Stephon! Come help me with the keg.

STEPHON (admire_happy)
I’ll be back. talk with people make some new friends.

JESSIE (talk_agree_happy)
See ya soon.

NARRATOR
Jessie stood alone for a while. She decided to head upstairs and look for Stephon.

JESSIE (talk_apathetic)
Where’s Stephon?

NARRATOR
As you went up. there was a room. Nobody was in it. You walked in and starting looking around.

JESSIE

NARRATOR
You started looking at pictures and THEN something caught your eye.

INT. DUMPY APARTMENT BEDROOM - NIGHT with PHOTO FRAME

JESSIE (cry_sniff_sad_loop)
Oh MY GODD!!

JOEY (talk_argue_angry)
WHAT ARE U DOING IN MY ROOM!

JESSIE (react_shocked_gasp)
JOEY!!

}“I’m single and ready to minngle”{

STEPHON (talk_agree_happy)
Great to know! So am I. Wanna dance?

JESSIE (laugh_giggle)
How could I say no to that face?

NARRATOR
After they danced for hours. They headed to one of Stephon’s friends party.

INT. BBG HOUSE PARTY - NIGHT

ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
Stephon! come help me with the keg.

STEPHON (admire_happy)
I’ll be back. Talk with people make some new friends.

JESSIE (talk_agree_happy)
See ya soon.

NARRATOR
Jessie stood alone for a while. She decided to head upstairs and look for Stephon.

JESSIE (talk_apathetic)
Where’s Stephon?

NARRATOR
As you went up. there was a room. Nobody was in it. You walked in and starting looking around.

JESSIE

NARRATOR
You started looking at pictures and THEN something caught your eye.

INT. DUMPY APARTMENT BEDROOM - NIGHT with PHOTO FRAME

JESSIE (cry_sniff_sad_loop)
Oh MY GODD!!

JOEY (talk_argue_angry)
WHAT ARE U DOING IN MY ROOM!

JESSIE (react_shocked_gasp)
JOEY!!

}“Ummm… you’re hot”{

STEPHON
Gotta a little crush I see.

JESSIE (blush_shy)
… do you?

STEPHON (talk_agree_happy)
Of course.

STEPHON (idle_phone_sad_loop)
Okay… see ya there. I gotta head to my friends party. You can come.

JESSIE (talk_agree_happy)
The night’s still young lead the way sir.

INT. BBG HOUSE PARTY - NIGHT

ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
Stephon! come help me with the keg.

STEPHON (admire_happy)
I’ll be back. Talk with people make some new friends.

JESSIE (talk_agree_happy)
See ya soon.

NARRATOR
Jessie stood alone for a while. She decided to head upstairs and look for Stephon.

JESSIE (talk_apathetic)
Where’s Stephon?

NARRATOR
As you went up. there was a room. Nobody was in it. You walked in and starting looking around.

JESSIE

NARRATOR
You started looking at pictures and THEN something caught your eye.

INT. DUMPY APARTMENT BEDROOM - NIGHT with PHOTO FRAME

JESSIE (cry_sniff_sad_loop)
Oh MY GODD!!

JOEY (talk_argue_angry)
WHAT ARE U DOING IN MY ROOM!

JESSIE (react_shocked_gasp)
JOEY!!

}

gain interest_in_guys

goto merge_story

label girl_love

JESSIE
(Hot Stranger is tots flirting. Should I say yes?)

choice
“You can do more than keep me company”{

ALEX (blush_shy)
Wow… umm sure.

JESSIE (talk_agree_happy)
Great. Shall we dance?

NARRATOR
They danced the night away.

INT. BBG HOUSE PARTY - NIGHT

ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
Alex come help me with the keg

ALEX (admire_happy)
I’ll be back. talk with people make some new friends.

JESSIE (talk_agree_happy)
See ya soon.

NARRATOR
Jessie stood alone for a while. She decided to head upstairs and look for Alex.

JESSIE (talk_apathetic)
(Where’s Alex?)

NARRATOR
As you went up. there was a room. Nobody was in it. You walked in and starting looking around.

JESSIE

NARRATOR
You started looking at pictures and THEN something caught your eye.

INT. DUMPY APARTMENT BEDROOM - NIGHT with PHOTO FRAME

JESSIE (cry_sniff_sad_loop)
Oh MY GODD!!

JOEY (talk_argue_angry)
WHAT ARE U DOING IN MY ROOM!

JESSIE (react_shocked_gasp)
JOEY!!

}“Sure”{

ALEX (admire_happy)
Great! My friend has this party going on. I’d promised I’d be there. You can tag along?

JESSIE
Sure.

INT. BBG HOUSE PARTY - NIGHT

ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
Alex! come help me with the keg

ALEX (admire_happy) I’ll be back. talk with people make some new friends.

JESSIE (talk_agree_happy)
See ya soon.

NARRATOR
JESSIE stood alone for a while. She decided to head upstairs and look for Alex.

JESSIE (talk_apathetic)
Where’s Alex?

NARRATOR
As you went up. there was a room. Nobody was in it. You walked in and starting looking around.

JESSIE

NARRATOR
You started looking at pictures and THEN something caught your eye.

INT. DUMPY APARTMENT BEDROOM - NIGHT with PHOTO FRAME

JESSIE (cry_sniff_sad_loop)
Oh MY GODD!!

JOEY (talk_argue_angry)
WHAT ARE U DOING IN MY ROOM!

JESSIE (react_shocked_gasp)
JOEY!!

}“It’s getting pretty crowded”{

ALEX (talk_agree_happy)
OH I need to head to my friends house anyways. Come with.

JESSIE (talk_agree_happy)
SURE, LET’S GO!

INT. BBG HOUSE PARTY - NIGHT

ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
Alex! come help me with the keg.

ALEX (admire_happy)
I’ll be back. talk with people make some new friends.

JESSIE (talk_agree_happy)
See ya soon.

NARRATOR
JESSIE stood alone for a while. She decided to head upstairs and look for Stephon.

JESSIE (talk_apathetic)
Where’s Alex?

NARRATOR
As you went up. there was a room. Nobody was in it. You walked in and starting looking around.

JESSIE

NARRATOR
You started looking at pictures and THEN something caught your eye.

INT. DUMPY APARTMENT BEDROOM - NIGHT with PHOTO FRAME

JESSIE (cry_sniff_sad_loop)
Oh MY GODD!!

JOEY (talk_argue_angry)
WHAT ARE U DOING IN MY ROOM!

JESSIE (react_shocked_gasp)
JOEY!!

}

gain interest_in_girls

goto merge_story

label merge_story

#back to main storyline.

Notes

  1. I’ve used: HOW TO: Labels and Gotos 🖤 but this can be used as well: 🍀 HOW TO: Choice Inside Choice :yay:

I’d also recommend to get a proof-reader.

  1. Feel free to check out Dara’s website for guides & templates:
  1. I’m not sure if I was able to copy your whole script haha (my phone went wacko on me but I love it) XD So I’d recommend for you to look carefully where I placed important stuff (I bolded it as well as a few grammatical/spelling mistake though there are way more)

  2. Testing paths out: Best to test different routes on the app and here’s a link on resetting story progress: HOW TO: Reset Story Progress + Bonus Stuff :blob_sun: