My story has been published!

My cover art/etc hasn’t finished yet, but i really wanted to publish.
I worked so hard on it, i hope you guys enjoy it.
Thank you all so much!

Moved to Share Feedback since it doesn’t appear this is for R4Rs. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to ask me if there are any questions. :wink:

I need honest feedback on my story x
link:
https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5274781294133248