My story needs some work!


#1

Hi there! I need some help with my story. It keeps on saying “Choices must follow dialogue immediatly, not a branch”.
This is what it looks like.

HARPER (admire_happy)
I look so cute!

  } choice "Wear this" {

HARPER
Perfect!

} “try something else” {

HARPER
I think I’ll try something else on

}

I’ve chaged it before but it still says it is wrong. Please help!


#2

Try this:

HARPER (admire_happy)
I look so cute!
choice
“Wear this” {
HARPER
Perfect!

} “try something else” {

HARPER
I think I’ll try something else on.

}


#3

I do realize that someone has helped you already, but I just want to point out what you did incorrect to help you in the future.

(Hope you don’t mind)

So when you right choice it always at the top

Ex.

Choice
“Choice 1” {
Code
} ”choice 2” {
Code
}

Then you continue like that. So you don’t need a curly bracket with the first choice. The word choice is at the top and the actual choice is under it with no curly bracket to the left.

Hope that helps for the future!

If it didn’t make sense, go ahead and tell me. I’ll try to straighten out my explanation.


#4

Love to quickly mention that I wrote “write” wrong. Sorry


#5

thank you!


#6

No problem!


#7

Thank you very much!