My Story Suggestions

http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5108902213844992 < this is my story, and I feel I kinda did a bad job.

Can you guys like suggest something, or tell me wat i should improve on?

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I just opened the app but it’s late for me so i’ll talk to you tomorrow (for me)…:sweat_smile:

Closing due to inactivity :slight_smile: