My story "The Guy on the Street"

Hello everybody !

I am a new author. I published my first story after several days of work and I want to collect the opinions of everyone. There are currently three episodes.

Title: The Guy on the Street
Type: Romance / INK (I’ll make a limelight story very soon!)
Subject: "You are the Queen Bee of your school. But after 2 years, you’re tired of it. And suddenly, you meet this bad boy who lives on the street. You can’t resist … But who is he ? "
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I accept all constructive remarks, because I am thirsty to always do the best job! Thank you all!

PS : English is not my mother tongue, so if there are some errors, thank you for telling me <3