My Upcoming story: The Payne Package

Hey whoever comes across this…I’m Jasmine. Lately, I’ve been feeling like episode has been getting soo dead, like without you is finished and a LOT of authors have discontinued their stories or are just inactive. I feel like what Episode needs right now is another banginggg story. So I’m planning on writing a story and i would just like a little recognition on this platform, also i will be doing read for reads when my story comes out.

heres a little but not final description of my story:

TITLE: THE PAYNE PACKAGE

She’s a confident hard-working girl, originally from the streets of New York, aspiring to be a world-famous superstar. I know what your thinking, how the hell is that going to happen? Royal Oak Academy. That’s your answer. The most prestigious performing arts and sports school in the world. A bunch of pompous rich kids go to Royal Oak but her pretty privilege and magnetic personality helps her survive in this school, climb the popularity hierarchy and find a handful of amazing friends but does it also attract the schools bad boy and was he also your ticket to the Payne Package

***Also I kind of want to call it comedy but haven’t gained the confidence to cos what if you lot don’t find it funny.

Alright so that’s the description.

would you prefer me to upload 3 episodes or like a whole lot more like 10 or something (by the way I haven’t started writing yet, i’ve just been planning)

ANY QUESTIONS ABOUT THE STORY (please do ask) OR ANY TIPS/ADVICE (please do give)

insta @epy_jasmine to keep updated

would appreciate the support and help so much. THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!

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Hi Jasmine! I’m Isabelle. Congrats on writing your story! It’s quite hard to give recognition to someone who hasn’t published a story yet but I’m sure your friends here or friends you make will help build your support. The forums is great with supporting new authors.

You story seems very interesting. Just some advice: don’t rush the storyline, make sure there is chemistry between the MC and the LI and try to avoid romanticizing toxic relationships. Also, even if your first language is English, it’s always best to have proofreaders. Try to find good ones or use grammarly/grammar websites to help you.

It’s up to you on how you want to release your episodes. If you have a lot of free time on your hands, you could release 3 episodes first and then update when you want. If you don’t have a lot of time, I would have a batch of episodes ready beforehand so you can have time to write.

Good luck on your story and writing journey! Wish you the best. Any questions, let me know! :purple_heart:

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Thank you so much. That was definitely good advice. Also, in my story I will definitely not be romanticising toxic relationships and I hate HATE when characters fall in love way too quick - in my story I will make sure there is a build up and a lot of chemistry. What I mean is, we won’t be seeing a first kiss in episode 3, let’s just say that!

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Hey guys! I’m Faith an author on episode! I’ve been writing on here for many years now and I would love to give writing tips and advice and I would deeply appreciate you guys checking out my stories as well!





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Quite a spoiler lol. And you’re welcome, I’ve seen a lot of stories from new authors who rush the storyline with no chemistry, so I’m glad you will be taking the time to

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This isn’t a thread to ask for advice. The OP asked for advice on her story, so if you want advice, please make your own thread

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I know. I don’t want advice. I’m saying I’ve been a author for a long time so I’m more than willing to give advice from my experience on coding or anything

Wow I totally didn’t read your whole post right lol. But you shouldn’t really promote your stories on this thread if she’s asking for advice

Hi, this sounds very interesting to read. Just curious is this going to be in INK OR LL? And to get recognized for your stories maybe do like R4R? And like if people do agree they wanna do R4R with you, make them send screenshots that they actually read your story, so your not just reading theirs and they aren’t doing the same. And like on Instagram theres some accounts that also do R4R and they post it on their ig on what you should improve on what they like etc. Oh and like when u do ur characters make sure that they’re unique and they are not the SAME. I hope that helps and makes some sense. Good luck :slight_smile:

Thank you. It’s definitely going to be ink idk if this an unpopular opinion or not but I absolutely despise LL :tired_face:

Great!!!This story idea is dope​:heart::heart:

Let me know if you’re interested in a r4r. :sparkling_heart:

Title: Eat Stake
Author: Sinead O’Neill
IG: sinead.fictionist

Story Description
Trying to protect the world from the most powerful interdimensional being there is, is hard enough, but what happens when you fall for his hot but heartless son?(cc, choices, adv directing, music/sound, mini-games, art scenes)

Eat Stake link