Hi, I’m gonna start Reading your story soon. The review Will most likely be Done tomorrow or today
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Review for @Lex2
THIS REVIEW IS IN NO WAY MEANT TO OFFEND THE AUTHOR BUT TO PROVIDE FEEDBACK
Title: Too much baby drama
The name is kinda funny and cool, it would possibly make me Wanna read it if I saw it on the app.
Author: Lex
Genre: Drama
Chapters read: 3/7
Description: He has baby mama drama and a lot of it! Will you be able to deal with it or will you find comfort in the arms of someone else?
The caption suits the story and doesn’t reveal too much. It would possibly draw me in if I saw it on the app.
Cover: The cover wasn’t anything too interesting. It most likely wouldn’t capture My eyes if I saw it. The intro and endcard were kinda Bold and not that interesting.
CC: Yes, for your love interest and yourself. But I’d suggest adding More features since you missed out on a lot of them so I couldn’t get the exact features I wanted. You can Also choose their names.
Plot: The plot was filled with drama and funny aswell. It needs some plot and character development But it can potentielly be really good. It would be Nice too see More of their pasts in future chapters. For example why he became a player etc. I’m hoping there Will be More of that later on. I feel like the plot is developing More as the story goes on though But still needs a lot of development and character development. It would Also be fun to know if their parents play a part in their life because they haven’t been mentioned Once. 7.5/10
Overlays/directing: There was a couple of errors and things that looked a bit Weird. For example the bruise looks a bit off on her. It’s way too dark and big and doesn’t look natural At all. The party scene felt kinda empty and I feel like there needed to be More people there Then there was. Sometimes they’re just doing idle and it looks almost a bit awkward. I’d suggest adding for example the shiftweight animation instead of just having them standing idle. I didn’t notice any errors with the layering though which is good. Also in the first scene when the mc says in a narration box ”What the hell happened to you?” the speech bubble is covering her face. When the MC is getting dressed for her first date with him the transition in command you used took a little while to happen so it looked a bit weird. Also when they’re texting each other, instead of puttting a narration box make a overlay with a text bubble. It looks More realistic and then we can really see you put your heart and soul into the story. Also Don’t forget to reset the speechbubble so it isn’t placed weirdly. When the MC says ”I guess I’ll get dressed and showered” or something like that, the speechbubble is over her face. In the beginning of chapter 3 When the MC is laying on the bed She is facing the wrong direction. 6/10
Diversity: I saw diversity in for example their looks which I think is good. You Also seemed to Customize the background characters and most their outfits so each and every one of them were unique Which is good. 8/10
Music/sound: You used music and sound sometimes. You didn’t use it too Much either but every now and then. I Don’t remember seeing any errors in the music or sound. In the other chapters I didn’t notice Much sound or music though. 6/10
Spelling/grammar: In the first half of the first episode I saw a couple of spelling and grammar errors. For example when They are about to enter the club in episode 1 Marissa Said this Which I didn’t entirely understand What you meant with ”Maybe its (Don’t forget to add a ’ there, it’s) because everytime we go to a club YOU like someone ends up going to jail” I’m not sure What you mean by that. Also another sentence Marissa said went like this ”You don’t want him to think your easy, make him chase you”, it’s you’re, not your there. You also made some more errors so I suggest checking through the Episode or make someone proof read it. Sometimes you for example used seen when it was meant to be saw or lose when it was meant to be lost. Some punctuations were Also forgotten. In one or two sentences in chapter 1 (I don’t remember which ones) you forgot to capitalize the I. There were a couple as mistakes in chapter three as Well But not that many. 6/10
Choices: I barely noticed Any choices at all and if there was Any they didn’t seem to have Any impact on the plot At all except for Maybe a dialouge or Two.
I hope you add More choices in the future that have a meaning.3/10
Chapter length: The first chapter was a pretty good length. About 10-15 minutes. Chapter 2 was a bit shorter but not too short. Chapter three was pretty short though. 7/10
Cohesiveness: I feel like things were moving just a tad bit fast the first and second chapter. Things started to slow doen a bit though towards chapter 3 and a bit of chapter 2. 6/10
Narration: You used a lot of narration. But the thing is you told More rather than showing. Don’t tell me what’s happening, show it to me! Also you Don’t have to add a black background everytime you add a narration. Show it! It’s much more interesting rather than just hearing you talk about it. It may Also come off as a bit lazy if you tell some things rather than just showing it. Use overlays to show it, use animations, I don’t know, but it seems like you put a lot more effort in it if you don’t just explain what happens. You didn’t do it as much in the other chapters though which is good. You did it mostly in chapter 1. 4/10
Overall: It’s a good story that has potential but needs some development and some grammar/spelling fixment. It also needs some fixing in the directing/overlays part.
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Ty!! 
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Hi!
I would love a review of my new story. Any and all feedback is welcome! 
Here is the info:
Title: Dark Essence
Description: When the darkness inside threatens to break free & destroy everything you hold dear… Will you seek comfort in the ones you love or allow your Dark Essence to take over? (Lim CC)
Episodes: 3
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6025752143069184
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I’ll like a review! 
Story Name: Run At Midnight
Written By: lemon
Genre: Romance
Episodes: 3 (more chapters coming soon)
Short Description: You’re an athlete, the fastest runner in your class. But how are you going to run away from the pain and heartbreak when it always seems to chase you?
IG: @epi._.lemon
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4787100571467776
Note: There are no choices, and it’s only the first three chapters so there’s not much romance.
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Review for @Maya6 (I’m really tired so sorry if there’s some spelling mistakes etc in the review)
THIS REVIEW IS IN NO WAY MEANT TO OFFEND THE AUTHOR BUT TO PROVIDE FEEDBACK
Title: The star necklace
Author: Mayah
Genre: Drama
Chapters read: 3/8
Description: You are the most rich girl in your country… on top of this you’re famous… but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity?
Interesting description, it doesn’t sound like anything I’ve read before. I would most defintely consider Reading it if I saw the description on the app.
Cover: The cover wasn’t anything too special or interesting. I Don’t know if I would consider Reading it if I saw the cover on the app.
CC: Yes there was CC for the MC and her love interest.
Plot: The plot was unlike anything I have seen before. It covered a lot of issues that people might not think even exists anymore. It really made me wonder What happened next When I read it. Great job on the plot. Sure it could need some work But almost all plots need some work. It really seemed like you put a lot of thought into the plot. 9/10
Overlays/directing: You used a lot of overlays Which is good. The directing wasn’t anything way too advanced or anything way too simple. The overlays helped in making the story seem More interesting as Well. Even though I didn’t see that many errors in the directing I saw a few. The errors I saw was mostly because of the fact that in a lot of scenes the characters seemed way too small for their enviroment. Else I Don’t think I noticed Any errors in the directing. 8/10
Diversity: You had a lot of diversity. Not only did you show religions such as islam But you Also gave awareness to topics such as sexism. The characters in the story looked different and didn’t seem to all look alike, like They do in some stories. But you did use some default character/outfits here and there. I’d suggest Customizing every character and not use Any default characters or outfits. You Also used real life backgrounds a lot Which is something you Don’t see in Much stories Which was pretty cool. 9/10
Music/sound: You used a lot of sound throughout the story. It made it seem More realistic. But the things is I feel like you used a lot of the talking sounds too often. They sound a bit cringy in My opinion and you overused them. And in Once scene Where the MC is singing I’d suggest adding a different music that fits it More. For example the club music etc. Else I feel like you used the sound and music pretty good. 7/10
Chapter length: The chapters were a pretty decent lenght. Around 7-12 minutes. Some of the chapters were a tad bit on the shorter side though. 7.5/10
Cohesiveness: I feel like things were moving a bit slowly in the beginning and that things were a bit repetitive. But later on things moves a bit faster Which I think is good. Just Don’t move them too fast now either. 7/10
Choices: I Don’t think there Were Any choices At all. But it’s still a bit understandable since the first three chapters were mostly back story etc. I do hope you add some choices that ahve a meaning further into the story.
Spelling/grammar: Your spelling and grammar wasn’t too good. I know english is your third language so I suggest getting a proof reader. Now unfurtanely I didn’t note Any of your mistakes so if you Wanna fix them I suggest having someone proof read the first three chapters (I’m not sure if your grammar got better later on). But since english is your third language the grammar was fairly good for being your third language. 0/10
Narration: The narration wasn’t anything way too special. I Don’t have that many opinions on it though. I suggest trying to use some More difficult Words in it though. 5/10
Overall: It’s a good story with a unique plot Which needs some fixing in the grammar/spelling area.
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Thanks for the review
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Could I have a review please? 
I hope you enjoy it!
Title - Adventurous: Uniformed Saviour
Chapters - 3
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5433395695386624
Description - Follow Bella on a dangerous, thrilling, life-changing mission. Can YOU make the right choices to help Bella survive the path ahead? Character Customisation, Choices that matter, Tappable Overlays, Art Scenes, Minigames, 2 Love Interests and Multiple Endings.
Genre - Action
Author name - mollie.stories
Instagram - @mollie.stories
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Hi just letting everyone know that if you’re very low on the waiting list your review might take a week or More to complete. One review can take up to 2-3 hours or More depending on the story. I hope you understand it might take a while until your review is done☺️
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Story name Vip Brother:Love is…
Authors name Megz_episode
Episodes 4
Instagram name megz_episode7997
How many episode you want me to review 4 are enough
Description A story about 16 celebrities who enter the house of Big Brother uder 24/7 surveillance for 2 months to win the prize of 500 000$, but before that they have to go through all challenges of Big Brother.
I would like you to promote my story.
Style LL
Cover
Link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4977128782561280
Hello I would love to give my story a review 
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I Will start Reading your story now. It will most likely be Done tomorrow or today.
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Review for @xinxmyxeye
THIS REVIEW IS IN NO WAY MEANT TO OFFEND THE AUTHOR BUT TO PROVIDE FEEDBACK
Title: Scars
Author: inxmyxeyes
Genre: Action
Chapters read: 3/3
Description: The past created who Eve is right now. Life never goes easy on her. That’s why she became so ruthless to anyone she’s ever met.
Honestly the description wouldn’t make me that interested in Reading it if I saw it on the app.
Suggestion for the description:
Tough, past events lead to her becoming the ruthless woman she is today. Because life never really seemed to go easy on Eve
(It’s just a suggestion, you Don’t have to use it.)
Cover: The covers weren’t anything way too interesting. I’m not sure if I would click on it if I saw it in the app.
CC: There was No CC. I’d suggest using this to your advantage since you can use full body overlays, hands overlays etc easier now if you Wanna use them.
Plot: When Luke calls the ambulance it was a bit unrealistic How fast the ambulance came. They seemed to be there within seconds. I’m Also a bit confused What She works with. Is She an assasain? I Don’t really get it. But the plot was pretty interesting and intruiging except for that. The car crash scared me to death tbh, I did not expect that so suddenly. I Also hope we’ll see some character devolopment as Well as some flashbacks on her past. Because I’m really wondering What lead to her killing people etc. 7.5/10
Overlays/directing: In Episode 1 When the reporter was talking She used the same animation all the time. It looked a bit Boring and I’d suggest using different animations rather than just one. Also the party scene and ball scene looked a bit empty. I’d suggest adding a bit More background characters. They add a lot to the story. But I didn’t notice any errors really. The directing was good and you used a lit of overlays. Good job. 8/10
Diversity: I saw some diversity in their looks, personalities etc. You Also seemed to Customize all the backgrounds characters and their outfits as Well Which is pretty good. Except for that I didn’t see that Much diversity. 7/10
Music/sound: You used music and sound every now and Then. I prefer a bit More music But That’s just my opinion. You did a pretty good job on adding sound and music. 7.5/10
Chapter length: The chapters were a pretty good length. About 10-15 minutes long Which is not too long But not too short either. 9/10
Cohesiveness: I feel like things were moving a bit too fast and I couldn’t really understand everything because things were moving so fast. I’d suggest slowing them down just a bit even though it’s an action story. I feel like the car crash was very sudden Which was probably the point But too Much was happening. I’d suggest adding it in another Episode instead because it felt kinda pushed in there. Like you added it just for More action. 6/10
Choices: I didn’t see that many choices At all. I saw a couple of dressing games Which was pretty fun. But except for that I only noticed one choice that actually seemed to make a difference. You Said They Will matter though Which is fun. Just a idea But you could use the point system aswell so you can gain points with for example other characters. 6/10
Spelling/grammar: The spelling and grammar was really good. You made the right choice by asking someone to proof read it because I didn’t really notice Any spelling or grammar errors. 9/10
Narration: The narrration was pretty decent. I Don’t really have Much to say about it. Nothing too special But Nothing too Boring. You showed More rather than telling Which I think is good. 7/10
Overall: It’s a good story that has a lot of potential. Things need to slow down a bit though. The endings made me More intruiged in Reading and finding out More about it. I didn’t have too much things to point out in this review meaning you did a pretty good job. It’s a plot with a lot of potential.
Hi. I’m gonna start Reading your story now. The review Will take anything between one hour to a couple of hours depending on How long the chapters are and How long writing the actual review Will take.
Story Title: Faultless
Author: London
Genre: Drama
Style: Limelight
Description: City Wright is a privilege girl attending Diamond Heights University, one of the most prestigious schools in Chicago. What happens when she gets an offer she cant refuse?
Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5359337338109952
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Review for @Kalani-Santino
THIS REVIEW IS IN NO WAY MEANT TO OFFEND THE AUTHOR BUT TO PROVIDE FEEDBACK
Title: Betting on a Double
Author: Kalani Santino
Genre: Drama
Chapters read: 3/8
Description: What happens when a teenager impersonates a dangerous criminal & gets his friends and himself into trouble with the wrong people?.. can he save himself & his friends?
It sounds pretty cool But I’m not entirely sure if I would click on it if I saw it in the apo or not.
Cover: The cover was kinda cool. I feel like it could need More drama in it though, if you get What I mean. It’s a drama story After all and the fact that it’s just a Blue background looks a bit Boring.
CC: There was No CC. I’d suggest using this to your advantage. You can use hand overlays. Describe little things about them for example their eye colour etc if that makes sense.
Plot: The plot was really confusing and most of the time I didn’t understand What was going on. At first I thought Italia was a kid But apaprently she’s an adult. And later Rome kissed her on the cheek and called her babe Which made me think She was together with him But Then She kissed the other Guy and calls him a friend? His name is apparently Rome But Then Why do They call him Scar. I would love an explantion on that and a lot of other things. How in the world do They think that Jordan is scar? He doesn’t even look like him. His hair colour is different, he had beard and his voice must be different, right? If they’re his friends Then How Don’t They regonize him. Italia seems to regonize him though. Feels kinda unrealistic to me. I hope you clear these things up in future chapters because At the moment They were a bit unclear. Some of these points were made a bit More clear in the end of chapter 3 But I’m still a bit confused. 5.5/10
Overlays/directing: The club scene looked way too empty. I’d suggest adding More background characters that are doing different kinds of animations. In the scene when They are At the bar, all the characters looked too small for the bar. The same thing happened in the scene When They followed the Guy to his house (or hotel?). The characters Once again looked way too small. You sometimes used transition in When it was meant to be transition out. I don’t remember What specific scenes you did this in though. There was dressing games for the girl But not for the MC. Sure, he might not care what he wears but it would be fun to have some dressing games for him too rather than just her. The blood just suddenly pops up in chapter 2 which looks a bit weird. I’d suggest making it smaller then slowly become bigger. The blood pool is like one cm away from him? It looks a bit weird. When Italia was looking At Jordan in the hospital and walked up to him, She looked way too big for Jordan and Jordan looked way too small. When She entered the hospital She Also looked way too small. That and the fact that She has a bow makes it kinda look like She is a little kid. (Ofc I Am awake grown ups can wear bows But that with the fact that She looked too small for her surrondings made me think She was a kid.) But Then apparently She ends up being his girlfriend instead. Very confusing. I noticed very few overlays and the directing wasn’t anything too impressive. 5/10
Diversity: In the party scene all the background character were default and their outfits as well. It comes off as lazy to not Customize (or At least randomize) the characters and their outfits. I didn’t see that Much diversity really. When it comes to background you used a couple of customised backgrounds etc. But in the scene when Jordan facetimes with Lexus there is a white background for some reason. Looks a bit Weird. 5/10
Music/sound: The sound and music in the first scene (When the guy was filming him) of the first chapter sounded way too happy. It made it less enjoyable and realistic to read since the music doesn’t suit at all. I’d suggest putting more dramatic, scary or sad music for that. scene. I didn’t notice that Much sound After the first chapter. 6/10
Chapter length: The chapters were a pretty good length. About 12-17 minutes I think. 10/10
Cohesiveness: Things were moving way too fast. It was confusing and too many things happened At Once. You really need to slow things down a lot even though it’s a drama story. Keeping up with everything that was going on was really hard and confusing. It felt like 10 chapters She gone by when I was only on chapter 3. 3/10
Choices: There wasn’t really Any choices and None of them had a meaning I’m guessing. There was choices like slap him or choose between a couple of drinks etc But They were a bit unecessary since They didn’t change anything except for a dialouge or Two. It’s your story so you can choose if you Wanna add choices But if you decide to I suggest making them actually matter. 3/10
Spelling/grammar: the most common mistake you made was to use the commas incorrectly. You either forgot to put a comma or put one When it wasn’t needed. For example: Come on Jord what is the worst that could happen? It’s meant to be ”Come on Jord, what is the worst thing that could happen?”. You Also wrote ”I’d still go back to that bar I wouldn’t change anything that lead me to where I Am today.” It’s meant to be ”I’d still go back to that bar, I wouldn’t change anything that lead me to where I Am today.” There was a lot, and I mean a lot of these mistakes so I can’t mention every one of them. You sometimes forgot punctations. You sometimes capitalized letters that weren’t meant to be capitalized. For example the doesn’t have to be capitalized. In chapter 3 they talked about Rome and Italy? Why? Is She called that or do they just randomnly start talking about Italy. But Then we meet Rome Which is apparently a Guy. And her name if Italia, Why do They call her Italy. Is it a nickname? Because it kinda sounds like They are talking about the country When They say Italy instead of Italia to her. There was a couple of spelling mistakes too But not that many and not Any I can really remember. You sometimes wrote see When it was meant to be saw and Give When it was meant to be gave. I really suggest getting More Then one proof reader. 6/10
Narration: The narration wasn’t antthing too special. You didn’t use Any unique Words and used the narrration to describe things rather than to describe feelings Which I feel like is the best way to use narration. I wasn’t really impressed. 3/10
Overall: It has a lot of potential But needs some work. Things happened too fast. There was a lot of grammar mistakes here and there as Well. The overlays and directing wasn’t really impressive either.
Thank u so much for this review.
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I know that my description is bad. I’m not good at this at all. So I am planning to change it, but still I’m thinking about how it should sound like. And yours is pretty nice.
About cover, I won’t agree. But I think it is just my own opinion. My friend made it for me and I’m just in love with this cover. I can understand that not everyone can like it.
So I will surprise you! This unrealistic situation happened to my dad-in-law when he cut his fingers away. The ambulance was in the neighborhood, so it took seconds to be at my dad-in-law’s house.
Yep, she is.
It did. But this kind of things is not planned. And it always happened suddenly 
maybe I just like to shocked everyone.
They will be soon!
About choices there were more important choices than one. But only since I told to choose wisely 
sometimes “not important choices” can affect your life, like the choice to take shower, u opened the hidden scene by choosing it (in the hidden scene you can also gain more points) and then you gain more relationship points. Also, it depends on readers what kind of friendship you have with Aria. I told once choices affect the story, the rest is not told.
Once again to take time to review my story! It was really refreshing and helpful!
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Maybe I just didn’t notice that there was More choices. I didn’t mean the car crash as a bad thing though, it did scare me to death😂 I did enjoy your story❤️
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I didn’t really think about the fact that the ambulance could be in the neighborhood😛
