What i need you to do
- tell me (snapshot) any mistakes ive made
- tell me how you think i should change the scenes to make sense to the readers
- tell me what i should add to the scenes and story for you to enjoy it more and for the reader to understand the story
- any spelling or name mistakes ive made
if you can do that for me then please message me
NOTE - the splashes havent been made or accepted yet so they arent added to the story yet