Hello. Sorry if this is in the wrong category I think it’s right but yeah. I would like someone to give their opinion on the first chapter of my story. It’s not published yet, so I will dm you the script. Just want your opinion on it. Maybe it’s that it needs more choices or a better flow of conversation I don’t know. Thank you in advance!
Sure I can help you
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I’d be happy to give it a read 
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