I’m starting my first story. I’m not sure if I’m even finished with my first episode. but I want a bit of advice on if I should add more, end it now, or what I can improve!
Here’s my synopsis:
You and your BFF are spending your summer at an awesome beach resort! But when your friend’s celebrity crush, Shayne Wilson, arrives at the same resort, things start to get interesting. Your friend wants you to befriend Shayne so you can set them up. At first, you think Shayne is stupid, and overrated. But when you get to know him, your feelings change, and soon, you fall in love as well! Will you be a good friend, or follow your heart? And if you follow your heart, what consequences will you face?
LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5800354259861504
If you could help that would be great! If not, thats oki too! Ty!