Need description ideas 😩

Hey guys

So im planning to write a story i also thinked of an description but i need to make it better so can yall help me w it by re doing it so this is the plot

Ellie a freshman who’s focusing on her career August a sophomore who’s hardworking for his family what happens if they crosses path

Thank you so much in advance :pleading_face::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Well, automatically there’s just formatting things and then there’s tweaking.

Ellie, a career driven freshman; August, a family oriented sophomore. What happens if they cross paths?

Or
Ellie: a freshman working hard towards her career, and August: a sophomore working hard for his family. What happens if they cross paths?

Idk if that would be too long tho.
If it isn’t you can add stuff like if you have CC or not and things like that at the bottom.

Ex: Ellie, a career driven freshman; August, a family oriented sophomore. What happens if they cross paths?

CC/Choices matter

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Thank you so much :blush:

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