Need error help with choice game

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Anybody got any idea as to why I keep getting errors, the error says 'Choices must follow dialogue immediately not a branch I’ll bold the line thats got the error.
CHLOE (think)
Now should I do something with my hair?
choice
“Hair”{
goto hair
}
“I’m done!”{

@CHLOE is primp_brush_hair

    CHLOE (think)
How about some lipstick?

choice
“lipstick”{
goto lipstick
}

@CHLOE is apply_lipstick

choice –
“Fishtail Braid”{
@CHLOE is primp_brush_hair
@CHLOE changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto hair}

“Diva Curls”{
@CHLOE is primp_brush_hair
@CHLOE changes hair into Diva Curls
goto hair}

“Straight”{
@CHLOE is primp_brush_hair
@CHLOE changes hair into Straight
goto hair}
CHLOE (admire)
(This is perfect!)
choice
“Raven”{
@CHLOE is apply_lipstick
@CHLOE changes mouthColor into Raven
goto lipstick}

“Bordeaux”{
@CHLOE is apply_lipstick
@CHLOE changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
goto lipstick}

“Ruby Red”{
@CHLOE is apply_lipstick
@CHLOE changes mouthColor into Ruby Red
goto lipstick}
label end
@pause for a beat

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Delete that hyphen

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you bascally want a hair and lip stick tmeplate right??

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i put the hyphon just to show what bit i meant… and yeah thats basically it

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and with just those specific hairy-styles and lip stick colors

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yes please

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and you dont mind if i change it a bit like adding some yes and no

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thats fine, as long as it still has the animations im good

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label apperance_game

    CHLOE (think)

Should I do something with my |color:red| hair and lipstick?

choice
“Yes”{
goto hairstyle_lipstick_game
}
“No”{
goto end
}

label hairstyle_lipstick_game

    NARRATOR

Lets get started.

label hairstyles_game

    CHLOE (think)

What should I do with my hair?

choice
“Fishtail Braid” {
@CHLOE changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto hairstyles_game
}“Diva Curls” {
@CHLOE changes hair into Diva Curls
goto hairstyles_game
}“Straight” {
@CHLOE changes hair into Straight
goto hairstyles_game
}“Lets go to Lipsticks”{
goto lipstick_game
} “Done” {
goto end
}

label lipstick_game

    CHLOE (think)

Now which lipstick color?

choice
“Raven”{
@CHLOE changes mouthColor into Raven
goto lipstick_game
} “Bordeaux” {
@CHLOE changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
goto lipstick_game
} “Ruby Red” {
@CHLOE changes mouthColor into Ruby Red
goto lipstick_game
} “Done” {
goto end
}

label end
NARRATOR
Are you happy with how you look?
choice
“Yes, I look gorgeous!” {
@CHLOE is primp_condescend
} “No I want to change something” {
goto hairstyle_lipstick_game
}

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TRY this

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You need to put dialogue before the choice.

You hair and lipstick template is not ordered. I will leave it in the order you wrote it in.
You can change the text

CHLOE (think)
Now should I do something with my hair?
choice
“Hair”{
goto hair
}
“I’m done!”{

@CHLOE is primp_brush_hair

    CHLOE (think)
How about some lipstick?

choice
“lipstick”{
goto lipstick
}

@CHLOE is apply_lipstick

CHLOE
Which hair style?
choice
“Fishtail Braid”{
@CHLOE is primp_brush_hair
@CHLOE changes hair into Fishtail Braid
goto hair}

“Diva Curls”{
@CHLOE is primp_brush_hair
@CHLOE changes hair into Diva Curls
goto hair}

“Straight”{
@CHLOE is primp_brush_hair
@CHLOE changes hair into Straight
goto hair}
CHLOE (admire)
(This is perfect!)
choice
“Raven”{
@CHLOE is apply_lipstick
@CHLOE changes mouthColor into Raven
goto lipstick}

“Bordeaux”{
@CHLOE is apply_lipstick
@CHLOE changes mouthColor into Bordeaux
goto lipstick}

“Ruby Red”{
@CHLOE is apply_lipstick
@CHLOE changes mouthColor into Ruby Red
goto lipstick}
label end
@pause for a beat

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