Hi everybody! I just started writing so I wanted to get an outside feedback about my very first episode of my very first story… In particular I’d like to know if the dialogues are interesting, if you feel taken inside the story or if it just feels lame. The “lameness” is what scares me the most, so please be frank.
I’ll write you the details about the story after you’ll have read the first chapter 'cause I don’t want to spoiler anything. I’ll send the link to those interested!
Hi, I’m interested
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