Need Feedback for First Story


#1

Hi, I’m Eli B. and I just published my first story. I would really appreciate if people could review it. I would just like to know if there are people on Episode who get the humor or just enjoy the story in general.
The title is Infected Souls and it is more or less of an Action story.
Description: It’s the apocalypse. Alex wants the best for his loved ones, but what about himself? As insanity lurks in his mind, so does it lurk among the very people putting Alex in danger.

Here’s the Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6453391687155712 2

Thank you so much if you read!


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Duplicate topic closed. Refer to original topic.


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Topic opened by OP request.


#6

Thank you so much!