Need feedback for story

Hiya it would be SOO helpful if you could help me with my story. I havent finished it yet (only on the second chapter😂) but it would really mean the world to me if someone could give me feedback.
This is the link: I love Deadly seduction! Check it out! http://bit.ly/EpisodeHere #episode
So please do give me some pointers and I could do the same for you if you wish.
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This is the photo - sorry it’s SOO bad :joy:

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Hi :slight_smile: I will read it now :slight_smile:
Do you have the link? ^^

Please ignore me I didn’t realised you can’t shear story’s If you haven’t posted it yet :joy::joy: SOO sorry :joy:

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You can with the link ^^

How can you do that I tried pressing share and it just put the link to episode

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Moved to Share Feedback since you’re looking for feedback. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to PM me if there are any questions. :wink:

When you are on your episode writer portal, with your story etc, below that you have “share your story with friends” and there is link, you just have to copy that and send it here :slight_smile:

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