Need feedback on my new story......

Hello, all of your wonderful people!

Not long ago I published my new story, and I would really love if someone would give me some feedback on it? So I know what I can do better and so on. Here is the link :two_hearts:

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OK, so my charger’s busted lol but when I get a new one, I’ll give u feedback OK :wink:

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