Need feedback on my story // share yours!

Hey guys❣️

I have always been a fan of historical dramas and have written stories in the past, but this is the first time for me writing in this genre.

Would appreciate it if you would give me a read and tell me what you think about my story, and feel free to drop yours below!

Story: Ariella
Author: Chavon
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 3 and ongoing
Description: Many years ago a king spoke out a curse about a warlock and a vampire who would combine their powers to take revenge and put a hybrid princess on the throne. Her name? Ariella
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5654826507632640

Cover:

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Historical is one of my favourite genres! Would you be interested in doing a R4R with my Magicka story? It’s fantasy, not history, but I’d love to know what you think!

Hey, I honestly love your story and added it to my favorites, it’s so addictive!

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omg next story on my list! @chavontheauthor are u on instagram so i can feature on my page?

Yes, my instagram is also chavontheauthor!

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Hello! Wanna r4r with me?

Sure, what’s your story?

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Will read and get back to you now.
Please read mine and tell me what you think Thank you
Title: Heal My Heart
Author: Diane
Version: LL
Genre: Romance
Description: Not yet come put with one. Story is still to be published

the Red Curtain (male MC, LGBTQ+)

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Hey, I’d love to r4r :blush:

So here’s my story:
Title: Reality behind Glasses
Genre: Drama, Romance
Episodes: 5 (more coming soon)
Description: Layla returns back home to reunite with her childhood friends - disguised as a guy! But on her first day in school, she’s exposed by one of her classmates! [LL,CC, Art,Choices M]
Style: Limelight

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5385205688631296

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Hey there! I’ll read yours and I would love to hear your opinion about mine! :black_heart:

Story: The Vow

Author: Annelie Writes

Genre: Drama

**Story style:**Limelight

Description: After tragedy, Amanda lost her way. Like a hurricane, she lefts nothing behind her. Until she meets someone as destructive & it becomes a fight that threats to break them both.

Episodes published: 8

Cover by amazingly talented @episodexgabbygabi

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6117139925499904

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Thanks so much for sharing your story, I read yours!

I really like the fact that it started from the male character perspective before you switched to the female.

heyy! Are you interested in doing r4r with me? :thinking:
If you are let me know and I’ll PM you :smile:

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I think I will give your story a try. Sounds interesting. :slight_smile:

My story
Title: Act of vengeance
Author: Rosenspitze
Style: Limelight
Genre: Thriller/Drama
Chapters: 6 (more episodes coming soon)
Description: 1926: A hazardous situation and the shadowing of a girl have one thing in common: the death of your friends. Your plan - finding the murderers & taking vengeance. The hunt begins!
Instagram: rosenspitze.epsiode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5819471904702464
Cover:

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Hi everyone,

After reading some wonderful stories on Episode, I really wanted to give it a try myself. So I worked out a storyline and learned how to script within the past two weeks. And here’s the outcome.
I would really appreciate to receive feedback on my first story and I’d love to hear what you think!

Here are the details:


Title: The Intern
Description: Adia starts an internship at the company of her dreams. Nothing goes as planned as the handsome manager in charge nonchalantly catches her eye. Trouble is sure to follow.
Genre: Romance
Chapters so far: 7
Chapters planned: 10-12ish
Author: Ay Qcumber
Instagram: ayqcumber
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4554982126977024

Much love and stay safe everyone!

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Hello! Wanna 8x8 r4r?
my story

Hello thank you so much for reviewing my story.
Sorry for the delay I was really busy. I was finally able to read your story. I love your plot it’s really interesting. Can’t wait to see more of the Ariella, Gabe, and Julian trio. Your directing is good and how you placed your overlays. Really amazing
Sorry again for the delay and thanks once more for your honest opinion concerning my story


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