Need Feedback on New Story "Our Galaxies Intertwined!"

#1

Hi everyone!

Please read my new story “Our Galaxies Intertwined” and let me know what you think! I really need some opinions on if you like it, what you don’t care for, etc. I published the first 3 chapters last night and I would really appreciate your thoughts, feedback, and support!!

Linktree: https://linktr.ee/msnattyjames

Episode link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5776939295834112

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Checkout this story, on the Episode App! If you like it, support the story by passing it along!

Please read and let me know what you think!!

Story Bio:
When danger comes to Earth in the form of a sexy alien, intrigue and drama follow when he falls for shy girl, Genevieve.

New Story - "Our Galaxies Intertwined" Out Now! - Check it Out! :)
#2

I thought the premise of your story was interesting and the story line itself was very good. There were a few jumpy motions when she was partnered up with Jacob in Astronomy and when she thought she was dreaming about him in her room, but that can sometimes happen when you switch from mobile to desktop for direction. I felt you did a nice job showing the story from both characters points of view and I am intrigued to see more. I am also appreciative to know I’m not the only person writing in the sci-fi genre. I see a ton of fantasy on Episode, but not a lot of good old fashioned sci-fi.

If you are looking for a story to read, mine is Star Crossed Dream Girl. Twin brothers Steve and Alex travel to planet New Hope to help settle human colonists on the new world. After the colony ship crashes, they begin the search for survivors and meet Tara, whom they have both been dreaming about for many years. What Tara doesn’t know is that her whole life is a lie, but with the help of the brothers she is able to unravel her mysterious past and discover the true meaning of love and family. I wanted to create a story where the main character is central to the story, but the ensemble cast of supporting characters had their own story lines taking place both in the past and the present.

#3

Thank you so much @pikaii4! I really appreciate your feedback and support!!! Yes! I completely agree! It’s so nice to know that there are others out there creating stories for the sci-fi category!!! :blush: Your story sounds very interesting and creative!!! I’ll definitely give it a read and let you know what I think!!!

#4

Hello All You Beautiful Episode People!

My new story “Our Galaxies Intertwined” is out now! I published the first 3 chapters last night and I would really appreciate your thoughts, feedback, and support!!

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Linktree: https://linktr.ee/msnattyjames

http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5776939295834112

Please read and let me know what you think!!

Story Bio:
When danger comes to Earth in the form of a sexy alien, intrigue and drama follow when he falls for shy girl, Genevieve.