Need feedback on story! Xoxo

So I did some changes in the first episodes and was wondering if someone could look at them and give me feedback. I would really appreciate it! You can give the feedback here or on Instagram (@miranda_epi).
More than one person can do this, I want all the feedback I can get!

Title: Better Than Ever
Author: Miranda

I would love it if someone did this!

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